Am I getting through???

trinityelizatrinityeliza Posts: 426
edited January 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Being with you
Holding your body close
Hand in hand, eye to eye
Is the single most important thing in my life
To keep you safe and warm

I love you with all my heart
Every feature of this beautiful girl
This truly, amazing women
Another reason for my heart to grow fonder
Soul, more full of passion

I know it has been said many times before now
But it must be said again
Showing how I feel about you
The best thing to happen to me
Through my journey of life, is you

If I were to list every intricate detail that I
Fixate upon, dream about of yours
That list would never end
Line after line of beauty and loveliness

Your eyes, shining with fierce emotion
Staring deep inside, feeling like I have connected with
The very bonds of passion

Your lips, flawlessly shaded
Soft as silk
Perfectly carved as if from true beauty itself

Your hair, shimmering with every flick
Scented with the loveliest of scents
Enticing, endearing

Every aspect of your body and soul
Cemented into my mind, sticking with me
Where ever I may travel

I don’t mind if this poem doesn’t rhyme
Fix context or even make a whole lot of sense
As long as it gets the important point across to you
That I love you with all my heart

You have made me the happiest I have ever felt
And if you let me
I will spend every second of my day
Every breath I carry
Trying to make you feel the same way
Put me in coach...I'm ready to
Fuck up...the USA...
Look at me...I can rig...
The presidency!!!!
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Comments

  • :):):):):):) Loverly!
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • Thanx my lovely BE :D
    Put me in coach...I'm ready to
    Fuck up...the USA...
    Look at me...I can rig...
    The presidency!!!!
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