Dancing with me on the clouds...

trinityeliza

Candlelight surround the room, casting a moonlit glow,
Satin sheets upon the bed, music soft and low.
'Tis a Garden of Eden in this room tonight,
Two lovers come to share, their passion to ignite.

Wrapped in an embrace, as they lay upon their cloud,
For this night, only fantasies will be allowed.
His hands explores the sacred treasures to behold,
She responds to the sweet torment, passions unfolds.

Two lover's meet, a night of cloud dancing begins.
Each touch hotter than the last, sweat glistens their skin.
The smell of her firm breast, like the finest perfume,
Firm thighs wrapped around him, he enters passions room.

Like lightening in a storm, they dance, so wild and free,
Wave after wave they ride, on paradise sea.
He speaks out her name; pulsating beats start to grow,
As lightening in a storm, passions liquids flow.

Two lover's now free to rest on ecstasies cloud,
Tensions released, pleasure given, as they had vowed.
Lover's now breathless and weak, hold each other tight,
Basking in the glow, on passion shared here tonight.

electronblue

holey trinity! tis beautiful....~

electronblue

i just wanted to swing back by here and read it once more....~

trinityeliza

thank ya very much my friend,... i appreciate all comments-- i am a sucker for critique good or bad.

velvet I site

trinityeliza wrote:

thank ya very much my friend,... i appreciate all comments-- i am a sucker for critique good or bad.

a sucker huh.. well i'm not sure what that means, but your poem is extremely beautifull.

is it based on experience?

trinityeliza

uh,...YEH.

velvet I site

trinityeliza wrote:

uh,...YEH.

well i think that makes it all the better.

trinityeliza

it does,... i try to write what i know,... straight from the heart,... i don't try to write, it just comes when it does,... it's like catching that purfect wave, ya know???