Connected

trinityeliza

an enraptured hearts confession,
a calculating minds obsession,
something I must effect,
something I dare perfect...

like two blazing suns merging,
dual destinies converging,
radiant arms entwining,
all the while enshrining

this cosmic expression,
of a love so true,
thus am I connected
with you.

velvet I site

trinityeliza wrote:

an enraptured hearts confession,
a calculating minds obsession,
something I must effect,
something I dare perfect...

like two blazing suns merging,
dual destinies converging,
radiant arms entwining,
all the while enshrining

this cosmic expression,
of a love so true,
thus am I connected
with you.

this is one of the most Beautiful expressions i've ever experienced... thank you.

trinityeliza

.....u are welcome. thanx for the feedback,... tring to sort out my spinnin' head... so many songs, poems,...lyrics... i could make 4 records easily and still have to make cuts on things that are good and flow...

citizen_drew

trinityeliza wrote:

.....u are welcome. thanx for the feedback,... tring to sort out my spinnin' head... so many songs, poems,...lyrics... i could make 4 records easily and still have to make cuts on things that are good and flow...

I’d say it’s flowing like an avalanche, but much more precise.
I never used to come in this forum…

trinityeliza

an avalanche??? LOL!!! I know i've been posting a lot as of late-- some don't like the amount that i get out when im in that plae i find and become all too prolific and hopefully at times I'll say something profound ;O
thanks anyway!!

justam

I love this one!