~Innamorare~

trinityeliza

Drifting back in time I hear that gentle caressing voice
More of a melodic murmur that tingled to the bone
An inherent gift to bathe one in comfort
Caught me off guard
Left me thrown
Into your magic and under your spell
Mesmerized by the intense affinty
My whole life spent dreaming you to life
When you appeared to me
It had to be,...
Nothing less than divinity
Your eyes seemed to hold the secrets of the universe
Burned through to the secrets of my soul
Sacred words spoken in silence
Finding utopia...
Becoming whole...
Security in your arms
Enraptured in your charms
Never knew a kiss
Could feel quite like this
Lost in a daydream
Where things were still what they seemed
Lost in a whirlwind
Where it's never what it seems
Lost again
To escape the pain,...
There's nothing like pain to make us all the same
A heavenly embrace that left me feeling like a child
A warmth more radiant than the sun
Endless rays of light & hope
Even when there seemed to be none
Exquisite depth in a connection
Fiery passion in a touch surreal
Boundless love scorched into my being
Emotions I was unaware I could feel
Security in your arms
Enraptured in your charms
Never knew a kiss
Could feel quite like this
Lost in a daydream
Where things were still what they seemed
Lost in a whirlwind
Where it's never what it seems
Lost again
To escape the pain,...
There's nothing like pain to make us all the same

twin2

Very romantic, passionate and well written. I love it!

trinityeliza

thank you very much twin2!! that one needed OUT!

twin2

trinityeliza wrote:

thank you very much twin2!! that one needed OUT!

And I'm glad it made it's way out.

trinityeliza

I'm here looking for constructive critcism!!! If you want to respon publicly that's fine. I also don't mind private messages. I'm trying to sort through over a decade of material!!!

trinityeliza wrote:

Drifting back in time I hear that gentle caressing voice
More of a melodic murmur that tingled to the bone
An inherent gift to bathe one in comfort
Caught me off guard
Left me thrown
Into your magic and under your spell
Mesmerized by the intense affinty
My whole life spent dreaming you to life
When you appeared to me
It had to be,...
Nothing less than divinity
Your eyes seemed to hold the secrets of the universe
Burned through to the secrets of my soul
Sacred words spoken in silence
Finding utopia...
Becoming whole...
Security in your arms
Enraptured in your charms
Never knew a kiss
Could feel quite like this
Lost in a daydream
Where things were still what they seemed
Lost in a whirlwind
Where it's never what it seems
Lost again
To escape the pain,...
There's nothing like pain to make us all the same
A heavenly embrace that left me feeling like a child
A warmth more radiant than the sun
Endless rays of light & hope
Even when there seemed to be none
Exquisite depth in a connection
Fiery passion in a touch surreal
Boundless love scorched into my being
Emotions I was unaware I could feel
Security in your arms
Enraptured in your charms
Never knew a kiss
Could feel quite like this
Lost in a daydream
Where things were still what they seemed
Lost in a whirlwind
Where it's never what it seems
Lost again
To escape the pain,...
There's nothing like pain to make us all the same

trinityeliza

Forgive me if at times

my aim is shoved astray
and if it seems occasionally
that i can't find my way

do not struggle with me
the blindness is my
self-inflicted disease
My sleep is coming...

Under the stress
of nightly reverie
Let the sweetness of
perfection
slip unto me,...

Maybe when the light
fades from off the street
the shadows will stroke me silently
Into my merciful sleep

I will have the benefit of
heavenly infection
the estrangement dispelled
by your black
perfection

the insolence,..
the violence....
watery fear
and stoney repression
dismissed with a wave
of the blackest
perfection

studio54raveman

This is BEE_YOU_TEA_FULL & SO R U !!!!

trinityeliza wrote:

Drifting back in time I hear that gentle caressing voice
More of a melodic murmur that tingled to the bone
An inherent gift to bathe one in comfort
Caught me off guard
Left me thrown
Into your magic and under your spell
Mesmerized by the intense affinty
My whole life spent dreaming you to life
When you appeared to me
It had to be,...
Nothing less than divinity
Your eyes seemed to hold the secrets of the universe
Burned through to the secrets of my soul
Sacred words spoken in silence
Finding utopia...
Becoming whole...
Security in your arms
Enraptured in your charms
Never knew a kiss
Could feel quite like this
Lost in a daydream
Where things were still what they seemed
Lost in a whirlwind
Where it's never what it seems
Lost again
To escape the pain,...
There's nothing like pain to make us all the same
A heavenly embrace that left me feeling like a child
A warmth more radiant than the sun
Endless rays of light & hope
Even when there seemed to be none
Exquisite depth in a connection
Fiery passion in a touch surreal
Boundless love scorched into my being
Emotions I was unaware I could feel
Security in your arms
Enraptured in your charms
Never knew a kiss
Could feel quite like this
Lost in a daydream
Where things were still what they seemed
Lost in a whirlwind
Where it's never what it seems
Lost again
To escape the pain,...
There's nothing like pain to make us all the same