Over Me

trinityeliza

I flipped her a vulgar gesture
In a subtle manner as I passed by
Two words conveyed by one finger
All but dignified

Her gaze is fixed on me
She's smoldering in her stare
She really did nothing to me
Today I just don't care
She's with the man I didn't want
My jealousy it makes sense to me
He has moved on so fast
How the fuck could he?
No--I still don't want him
Right now I don't want her to have him either
Maybe I should lead him on
Just so he will leave her

Right now I'm everything I hate
Meet MY ugly side
I'm being all the women I just can't stand
Wanna make him cry
Over me

Ask me if I care
I know this isn't right
Maybe I should kick her ass?
Put up a fight...
Put up a fight...
A fight for what
Tell me there's no reason
Right now I'd tell you
Shut the fuck up
You can't get through ya see
When I'm thinking this way
How could he get over me
I wanna make them pay
Right now I'm everything I hate
Meet MY ugly side
I'm being all the women I just can't stand
Wanna make him cry
Over me

twin2

How sad and bitter. It sucks. I have experienced my fair share of jealousy in a lot of ways through the years, and it can be very ugly. I hope you heal quickly and don't let the anger and hatred ruin who you really are.

eMMI

makes me think.
about the times I've acted/felt that way.
never wanna be in that state anymore!

pacifier

I really like this. emotional and honest and very easy to read and feel what you are going through.

Being Enlightened

I really liked this too! When you feel hurt and don't understand, it's easy to just get angry. This poem is honest and that's what makes it good.

Well there, now we've met your ugly side and it's much like our own. HA! I see you turning around....yup....I knew you had a good side!

trinityeliza

Being Enlightened wrote:

I really liked this too! When you feel hurt and don't understand, it's easy to just get angry. This poem is honest and that's what makes it good.

Well there, now we've met your ugly side and it's much like our own. HA! I see you turning around....yup....I knew you had a good side!

I've always been good The good side is apparant 95% of the time,... other times I bite!!!

trinityeliza

I'm here looking for constructive critcism!!! If you want to respon publicly that's fine. I also don't mind private messages. I'm trying to sort through over a decade of material!!!

studio54raveman

This one made me laugh it's funny,... Glad you arent really like that>

trinityeliza wrote:

I flipped her a vulgar gesture
In a subtle manner as I passed by
Two words conveyed by one finger
All but dignified

Her gaze is fixed on me
She's smoldering in her stare
She really did nothing to me
Today I just don't care
She's with the man I didn't want
My jealousy it makes sense to me
He has moved on so fast
How the fuck could he?
No--I still don't want him
Right now I don't want her to have him either
Maybe I should lead him on
Just so he will leave her

Right now I'm everything I hate
Meet MY ugly side
I'm being all the women I just can't stand
Wanna make him cry
Over me

Ask me if I care
I know this isn't right
Maybe I should kick her ass?
Put up a fight...
Put up a fight...
A fight for what
Tell me there's no reason
Right now I'd tell you
Shut the fuck up
You can't get through ya see
When I'm thinking this way
How could he get over me
I wanna make them pay
Right now I'm everything I hate
Meet MY ugly side
I'm being all the women I just can't stand
Wanna make him cry
Over me