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trinityelizatrinityeliza Posts: 426
edited November 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
pen in hand
thoughts
racing
round
set on writing
something
a message
to you
i sit
i stare
this
goimg nowhere
try again
think,...
you
us
a purpose
perhaps
blank pages
say
more
Put me in coach...I'm ready to
Fuck up...the USA...
Look at me...I can rig...
The presidency!!!!
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  • twin2twin2 Posts: 894
    This says little but alot all at the same time. I am sorry you are so hurt by someone.
  • sending a smile to you...:)
    love is free
  • sending a smile to you...:)


    Here's one right back atcha' babe!!!
    Put me in coach...I'm ready to
    Fuck up...the USA...
    Look at me...I can rig...
    The presidency!!!!
  • D Block (01/24/2004)

    Thoughts just keep feeling half finished but, sometimes, someone finishes them for me, yet, that's not how I'd finish them and it doesn't really feel finished so, I let them collect in this half finished space, in a half finished place, in all their half assed, half finished glory, in a half full box, half full of half finished and half full of nothing.

    :D

    I hate it when you feel the urge to write and what you have to say just doesn't come out right or at all!
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • D Block (01/24/2004)

    Thoughts just keep feeling half finished but, sometimes, someone finishes them for me, yet, that's not how I'd finish them and it doesn't really feel finished so, I let them collect in this half finished space, in a half finished place, in all their half assed, half finished glory, in a half full box, half full of half finished and half full of nothing.

    :D

    I hate it when you feel the urge to write and what you have to say just doesn't come out right or at all!

    That may be your problem... TRYING TOO HARD! I can only speak for myself and those I know, and everyone has a different method of writing,... BUT the best art is created out of the blue... words and/ormusic start spinning round your head... you'll be jotting lyrics down on napkins while out to dinner...Relax a while and let it come naturally.
    Put me in coach...I'm ready to
    Fuck up...the USA...
    Look at me...I can rig...
    The presidency!!!!
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