Still find my way,...

trinityeliza

still hang on every word
in the world of faded memories
where your still in love with me
I can see it in your eyes
you look as if your martyerdom has lost control

I must hold on
This happens all the time
I still find my faith in you
I cant hold on
this happens all the time
I still find my way to you

If a dreams all that ive got
then I wish you're in a fairy tale
where your still in love with me
I could see it in your eyes
the look as if your hero fell and lost his soul

I must hold on
This happens all the time
I still find my faith in you
I cant hold on
this happens all the time
I still find my way to you...

To you...
To you...
To you...

I must hold on
This happens all the time
I still find my faith in you
I cant hold on
this happens all the time
I still find my way to you

Being Enlightened

The repetition in this piece really worked beautifully! To me, it reads like the internal dialogue of a sad soul unable to let go of a love that's passed them by. The wishful thoughts surrounding the lines "where your still in love with me" are heartbreaking and wonderful and it made me feel that desperate hope one feels when they think the love can be rekindled, somehow. I liked this a lot, trinityeliza!

twin1

Being Enlightened wrote:

The repetition in this piece really worked beautifully! To me, it reads like the internal dialogue of a sad soul unable to let go of a love that's passed them by. The wishful thoughts surrounding the lines "where your still in love with me" are heartbreaking and wonderful and it made me feel that desperate hope one feels when they think the love can be rekindled, somehow. I liked this a lot, trinityeliza!

I agree with BE, the repetition worked well. I also felt the desperate hope and it made me sad. Great job!

twin2

I think BE and twin1 said it all. Nice one.