Ready,... Set...

trinityelizatrinityeliza Posts: 426
edited December 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Judge me at this juncture
Cast your stones of hypocrisy
Sheilded by your glass walls
Irony in your individuality

The components in my actions
Direct results of you
Dissension is the theme
What are you trying to prove??

Compare and contrast
If you so choose
I'm stabilized above it all
With nothing left to lose

Your repreive has been granted
Here's your ticket
Vanish into the sunset
Ready,... Set...
I'm done!

Mollified by another
Obstinate in my stance
Impetuous...yeh--it could be~
Why not take the chance???

Following your tracks
A road you frequently roam...
What happens if you travel far enough???
Do you forget your way back home???

Your repreive has been granted
Here's your ticket
Vanish into the sunset
Ready,... Set...
I'm done!
Put me in coach...I'm ready to
Fuck up...the USA...
Look at me...I can rig...
The presidency!!!!
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  • liked that one very much

    i like the way it read.
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
  • twin1twin1 Posts: 902
    Your repreive has been granted
    Here's your ticket
    Vanish into the sunset
    Ready,... Set...
    I'm done!

    I like this one! Especially the lines above. Good stuff!
    Our love must not be just words, but True Love, which shows itself in action,
    No one needs a smile more than someone who fails to give one,
    After you die...you know how to LIVE!
  • ...and i thank you both for making me blush,... had to get that one out!!!
    Put me in coach...I'm ready to
    Fuck up...the USA...
    Look at me...I can rig...
    The presidency!!!!
  • twin1 wrote:
    Your repreive has been granted
    Here's your ticket
    Vanish into the sunset
    Ready,... Set...
    I'm done!

    I like this one! Especially the lines above. Good stuff!

    Too bad it took 8 years to follow through!!!! :O
    Put me in coach...I'm ready to
    Fuck up...the USA...
    Look at me...I can rig...
    The presidency!!!!
  • twin1twin1 Posts: 902
    twin1 wrote:

    Too bad it took 8 years to follow through!!!! :O

    Yeah, well you were still smarter than I...took me 14 years!
    Our love must not be just words, but True Love, which shows itself in action,
    No one needs a smile more than someone who fails to give one,
    After you die...you know how to LIVE!
  • twin1 wrote:

    Yeah, well you were still smarter than I...took me 14 years!

    Ouch!!!! :(
    Put me in coach...I'm ready to
    Fuck up...the USA...
    Look at me...I can rig...
    The presidency!!!!
  • twin1 wrote:

    Too bad it took 8 years to follow through!!!! :O


    but you did follow through...

    the heavens say i know a very lucky man,... the luckiest in the world.
    BOW-WOW-WOW-YIPPIE YO YIPPIE YA
    BOW WOW WOW YIPPIE YO
    It's kinda hard in the L.B.C.
    When you're the SNOOP DO-GG!!!

    ME SAY"SHUGGY FO SHUGGY MY NOOGIE!!!!"-URBAN BOOGIE

    "REMEMBER KIDS LIVING IN TOTALITARIAN COMMUNES BREEDS DISSIDENCE"- POOPY BOOGIE'S TINKY
  • i'm spoiled ;D we'll have a tee made up so then i can come with a label!!! :)
    Put me in coach...I'm ready to
    Fuck up...the USA...
    Look at me...I can rig...
    The presidency!!!!
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