Like I do

trinityeliza

Broken
Bleeding
Trembling on the floor
Turn out the light
Shut the fucking door

you don't and you won't
see it
like i do
bleeding is all i do...

Reaching out for your presence
So close, yet you're not there
Last strands of sanity
Are way beyond....
...repair...

scream and bitch and rant and rave
scream and bitch and rant and rave

Break
and
Bleed
and
Tremble on the floor
Burning out the light
Shut your fucking door

you don't and you won't
see it
like i do
bleeding is all i do...

scream and bitch and rant and rave
scream and bitch and rant and rave

Feel it,...
Like I do.

twin1

This is moving and disturbing. A rather sad one...

trinityeliza

twin1 wrote:

This is moving and disturbing. A rather sad one...

No need to be disturbed,... it's the nature of my relationship with my pal g right about now-- we can sometimes be too much alike!!!

twin1

trinityeliza wrote:

No need to be disturbed,... it's the nature of my relationship with my pal g right about now-- we can sometimes be too much alike!!!

Ok, in that case! Good one!

Smashed again

i like your poem

trinityeliza

quit making this little one blush!!!! my face is already flu flushed

pacifier

I don't normally like swearing. I think there are generally better more effective ways of expressing what you mean, but here I think it added to the feeling. I mean "Shut the fucking door" certainly conveys a more clear message about your emotions in this case than just "Shut the door"

studio54raveman

i'm hearing the music baby,... it is a song that rocks!!!

trinityeliza

rock on lovie!!!