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trinityeliza

Last night you appeared to me,..
In a dream of mine
Out of this world, but so very real
Definitely one of a kind
Flying over a misty red sky
I heard your voice from a distance
Singing so softly
I had to follow
The curiosity I couldn't resist it...
Soaring along I happened upon a cave
Your voice still growing near
The entrance was blocked by a circle of fire
Still I glided right through with no fear
Searching-yet, unsure
Lurking like a spy
Suddenly I saw you there
Completely mesmerized
Perched atop a rock...
Singing to yourself
Playing a guitar
Your eyes were somewhere else
Somewhere far away
As if you were detached
Incessantly tormented???
Reflecting on your past....
You sang of neverending rain
Of wanting to be free
Words filled with a bitter sorrow
I remeber vividly....
Over and Over
"Always rain",...
"Always pain",..
You said that you wanted to
Fly away
"Let me out, let me be....
All I've ever wanted is to be free"
Silently I lingered
You seemed to struggle within
WHO AM I
Is what you screamed
All the secrets
All the sins
You sang of wanting rest
You whispered the word misery
Then in the middle of that song
You stopped
And looked at me
First with anger
Then it diminished
You motioned me closer
Said that you were finished
"So what did ya think?"
You questioned with a glare
"I didn't even see you,..
You realize that's unfair?"
"Forgive me for my intrusion...
I meant no disrespect--
Your words they seemed to beckon to me...
My manners I forget"
Your song it made me feel
Something I cannot describe
I could cheapen it by searching for words
None would justify...
Surprising enough that was okay
When I could make no comment
Your eyes they showed relief
Then you asked the strangest thing,..
"Would you die for music?"
"If there were no more left,...
Could you bear to lose it?"
My response was so quick
It startled me
"Yes I would with no regrets"
The truth within I could see--
Grinning ear to ear
You put your hand in mine
"Don't give up,..
Keep holding on...
You'll be free
In time,.."
In the end
You resumed your place on that rock
Your guitar you began to play
This time more of a chant than a song
"Fade away,...
....Fade away...
Fade away..."

depopulationINC

amazing

wonderful

Who is it about? I have a few guesses, yet I will not guess.

I loved it!

twin1

depopulationINC wrote:

amazing

wonderful

Who is it about? I have a few guesses, yet I will not guess.

I loved it!

I second Depop's...this one is really amazing Trinity!

twin2

I too enjoyed this one alot.

trinityeliza

depopulationINC wrote:

amazing

wonderful

Who is it about? I have a few guesses, yet I will not guess.

I loved it!

Glad you likey!!! I'm sure I know what you're thinking, and I assure you that is NOT the case dear!!! That is over 15 years old actually.... I still remember every moment so fucking vividly.... We'll just say that I dreamed that long before the person in the dream was even a part of my life. We have this thing in my family... It passes down along the generations and is quite a bit to handle at first. Now, I recognize the curse... as more of a gift... It was an extraordinary dream...

pacifier

I like this

this part especially made me think...

"Would you die for music?"
"If there were no more left,...
Could you bear to lose it?"
My response was so quick
It startled me
"Yes I would with no regrets"

depopulationINC

trinityeliza wrote:

Glad you likey!!! I'm sure I know what you're thinking, and I assure you that is NOT the case dear!!! That is over 15 years old actually.... I still remember every moment so fucking vividly.... We'll just say that I dreamed that long before the person in the dream was even a part of my life. We have this thing in my family... It passes down along the generations and is quite a bit to handle at first. Now, I recognize the curse... as more of a gift... It was an extraordinary dream...

hmm...interesting...

trinityeliza

depopulationINC wrote:

hmm...interesting...

...uhmmmm.... it was surreal depopulation inc.!!!! One of the most different from all of the others I've had in my life.... Sometimes, it's just small details, like my man is going to bust his snare drum,... other times I have been known to save people from harm's way.... only problem is it didn't help when it came to saving the single most important person in my life.... wanna pm????

~Eliza D-Little
Trinity~
~me~

lovin kind

take me to a far away place
i view myself as an angel while reading it

i feel the spirit of god right now

bless you

trinityeliza

lovin kind wrote:

take me to a far away place
i view myself as an angel while reading it

i feel the spirit of god right now

bless you

Hello,
I am happy you liked my art... Are you feeling okay today??? You can Private Message me if you'd like. I'm busy right now, but the invitation is an open one just so know

~D

studio54raveman

trinityeliza wrote:

Last night you appeared to me,..
In a dream of mine
Out of this world, but so very real
Definitely one of a kind
Flying over a misty red sky
I heard your voice from a distance
Singing so softly
I had to follow
The curiosity I couldn't resist it...
Soaring along I happened upon a cave
Your voice still growing near
The entrance was blocked by a circle of fire
Still I glided right through with no fear
Searching-yet, unsure
Lurking like a spy
Suddenly I saw you there
Completely mesmerized
Perched atop a rock...
Singing to yourself
Playing a guitar
Your eyes were somewhere else
Somewhere far away
As if you were detached
Incessantly tormented???
Reflecting on your past....
You sang of neverending rain
Of wanting to be free
Words filled with a bitter sorrow
I remeber vividly....
Over and Over
"Always rain",...
"Always pain",..
You said that you wanted to
Fly away
"Let me out, let me be....
All I've ever wanted is to be free"
Silently I lingered
You seemed to struggle within
WHO AM I
Is what you screamed
All the secrets
All the sins
You sang of wanting rest
You whispered the word misery
Then in the middle of that song
You stopped
And looked at me
First with anger
Then it diminished
You motioned me closer
Said that you were finished
"So what did ya think?"
You questioned with a glare
"I didn't even see you,..
You realize that's unfair?"
"Forgive me for my intrusion...
I meant no disrespect--
Your words they seemed to beckon to me...
My manners I forget"
Your song it made me feel
Something I cannot describe
I could cheapen it by searching for words
None would justify...
Surprising enough that was okay
When I could make no comment
Your eyes they showed relief
Then you asked the strangest thing,..
"Would you die for music?"
"If there were no more left,...
Could you bear to lose it?"
My response was so quick
It startled me
"Yes I would with no regrets"
The truth within I could see--
Grinning ear to ear
You put your hand in mine
"Don't give up,..
Keep holding on...
You'll be free
In time,.."
In the end
You resumed your place on that rock
Your guitar you began to play
This time more of a chant than a song
"Fade away,...
....Fade away...
Fade away..."

I cherish every word you share here. I adore you with a passion sublime. You are a true artist. (Fly together?;- )

trinityeliza

not with that elf again... although i cannot control them... you & I we run like the wind through fields gold....

studio54raveman

studio54raveman wrote:

I cherish every word you share here. I adore you with a passion sublime. You are a true artist. (Fly together?;- )

you are spoiling me with compliments!!! you know i'm like a giddy little girl whenyou say stuff like that