Daydream Dancing

trinityeliza

dancing
like there's nothing
left in this world
exquisite
for lack of a better word
music
echoes in her head
only in her head
still she dances to it
alone
without the lonliness
because
she'll alway have
the
music...
in her head
to stay with her
dancing
leaving all of the pain behind
spinning
across the room
across dimensions of space
never wanting to touch the ground again
all but earth bound
until the
music stops...
she walks perfectly in line
only in her head
as she weaves down the beach
her footprints tell a different story
one of indecision
confusion
but, she walks on
the edge of the living
at the edge of the dead
not knowing which is better
decididing not to decide
and just keep dancing
until
the music stops...
she stops
finds herself wondering
what is real
after she was lost
she finds herself
and wonders where she was
what is real
and who says why
and why do they?
her thoughts tumble
try to fall
out of her mouth
but she wont let them
because she would be crazy
so she keeps thinking
and she keeps quiet
until the
music stops

twin1

I really like this one...I got a very good mental picture. When I want to escape and forget everything I put on some music and dance around, it is nice to get lost in that and daydream...

twin2

I really liked this one alot.

Being Enlightened

I really liked this too, trinityeliza! It flowed very nicely, I thought.
I was particularily fond of these words especially:

"and who says why
and why do they?
her thoughts tumble
try to fall
out of her mouth
but she wont let them
because she would be crazy"

trinityeliza

Being Enlightened wrote:

I really liked this too, trinityeliza! It flowed very nicely, I thought.
I was particularily fond of these words especially:

"and who says why
and why do they?
her thoughts tumble
try to fall
out of her mouth
but she wont let them
because she would be crazy"

Isn't it nice to just flow... coast... sometimes.... Thanx,... I like this one myself.

Ali

Very,trinity eilza.
This one reminds me of me.:)

trinityeliza

Ali wrote:

Very,trinity eilza.
This one reminds me of me.:)

Hi there,

Is that a good thing that I just read you saying :VERY much like me "Eliza"
You have GOOD taste/sweet!!!!Write

Being Enlightened

trinityeliza wrote:

Isn't it nice to just flow... coast... sometimes.... Thanx,... I like this one myself.

Just riding the waves. *waves hello*

You're welcome!

studio54raveman

trinityeliza wrote:

dancing
like there's nothing
left in this world
exquisite
for lack of a better word
music
echoes in her head
only in her head
still she dances to it
alone
without the lonliness
because
she'll alway have
the
music...
in her head
to stay with her
dancing
leaving all of the pain behind
spinning
across the room
across dimensions of space
never wanting to touch the ground again
all but earth bound
until the
music stops...
she walks perfectly in line
only in her head
as she weaves down the beach
her footprints tell a different story
one of indecision
confusion
but, she walks on
the edge of the living
at the edge of the dead
not knowing which is better
decididing not to decide
and just keep dancing
until
the music stops...
she stops
finds herself wondering
what is real
after she was lost
she finds herself
and wonders where she was
what is real
and who says why
and why do they?
her thoughts tumble
try to fall
out of her mouth
but she wont let them
because she would be crazy
so she keeps thinking
and she keeps quiet
until the
music stops

Lucky are the ones here that you share your beauty with.

trinityeliza

to dance 1,000 dances with you...
to be side by side
our whole life through...
if it weren't for you....

well i am forever grateful for what i didn't do....

jaqueline huyer

this is how i feeling when i dance!!! THANK YOU!! I REALLY LIKE!

trinityeliza

you are welcome my darlin'

studio54raveman

trinityeliza wrote:

to dance 1,000 dances with you...
to be side by side
our whole life through...
if it weren't for you....

well i am forever grateful for what i didn't do....

i love you so much sweetheart. i'll never leave your side.