Tomorrow never comes...

trinityeliza
trinityeliza Posts: 426
edited December 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
I can't scrape myself up
for another day
All painted up and wearing
gorgeous shades of play
holding out my hand
for another red time
keeping my eyes open
for just a little more time
with black around my eyes
and red to close my lips
stumbling in broken feet
with my fingers cracking
at the tips
call it living, but not quite
but after tonight
everything
is going to be
alright....
Put me in coach...I'm ready to
Fuck up...the USA...
Look at me...I can rig...
The presidency!!!!
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  • pacifier
    pacifier Posts: 1,009
    after tonight
    everything
    is going to be
    alright....

    but tomorrow never comes.

    this feels awefully hopless and depressing
  • twin2
    twin2 Posts: 894
    pacifier wrote:
    after tonight
    everything
    is going to be
    alright....

    but tomorrow never comes.

    this feels awefully hopless and depressing



    I agree with pacifier.
  • twin1
    twin1 Posts: 902
    It does paint quite a picture. It has a "worn down" feel to it. Good writing but sad.
    Our love must not be just words, but True Love, which shows itself in action,
    No one needs a smile more than someone who fails to give one,
    After you die...you know how to LIVE!
  • trinityeliza
    trinityeliza Posts: 426
    Thanx 4 caring. People care less & less for themselves & more for others nowadays,.. I find you & a few others refreshing-- which is why I still come here.
    Put me in coach...I'm ready to
    Fuck up...the USA...
    Look at me...I can rig...
    The presidency!!!!
  • studio54raveman
    studio54raveman Posts: 72
    trinityeliza wrote:
    Thanx 4 caring. People care less & less for themselves & more for others nowadays,.. I find you & a few others refreshing-- which is why I still come here.

    I agree with you sweetie. That was beautifully written.
    BOW-WOW-WOW-YIPPIE YO YIPPIE YA
    BOW WOW WOW YIPPIE YO
    It's kinda hard in the L.B.C.
    When you're the SNOOP DO-GG!!!

    ME SAY"SHUGGY FO SHUGGY MY NOOGIE!!!!"-URBAN BOOGIE

    "REMEMBER KIDS LIVING IN TOTALITARIAN COMMUNES BREEDS DISSIDENCE"- POOPY BOOGIE'S TINKY
  • twin1
    twin1 Posts: 902
    trinityeliza wrote:
    Thanx 4 caring. People care less & less for themselves & more for others nowadays,.. I find you & a few others refreshing-- which is why I still come here.

    Thanks Trinity! I like reading your posts, they are passionate and creative. I like reading posts that I think people put alot of thought and heart into, that it meant something to them and they want to share it with others... :)
    Our love must not be just words, but True Love, which shows itself in action,
    No one needs a smile more than someone who fails to give one,
    After you die...you know how to LIVE!
  • coachchris
    coachchris Kelowna, British Columbia, Canada Posts: 749
    I definatly agree. The fact people are willing to open up and share their creativeness is amazing to me. So much talent on this board and this poem proves that point. I hope we all never stop caring for ourselves....
    Adolescence in essence is all about trust.
    Leaving is for the answering machine.
  • trinityeliza
    trinityeliza Posts: 426
    coachchris wrote:
    I definatly agree. The fact people are willing to open up and share their creativeness is amazing to me. So much talent on this board and this poem proves that point. I hope we all never stop caring for ourselves....


    thanx chris....
    Put me in coach...I'm ready to
    Fuck up...the USA...
    Look at me...I can rig...
    The presidency!!!!

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