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Come and Gone

Walking DeadmanWalking Deadman Posts: 7
edited October 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
I don't know if any of you will understand this piece I wrote.I guess I'm just a black soul Damned to live through all eternity:

You see it come
is it fear
or is it happiness

Is it love
or just eternal darkness

Is it the time of the reaper

Or is it the wind howling like a banshee

is it light
or just darkness

All that is known is

YOU ARE DEAD.
Now more war pigs have the power
Hand of god has struck the hour
Begging mercy for their sins
Satan laughing spreads his wings
OH LORD YEAH!!!!!!
Ozzy and Black Sabbath
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  • violet rayviolet ray Posts: 502
    sometimes its so hard to tell the difference, isn't it...
    You ask me to enter
    But then You make me crawl
    And I can't be holding on
    To what You got
    When all You've got is hurt
    ----
    Underneath this smile lies everything
    All my hopes and anger, pride and shame
  • Walking DeadmanWalking Deadman Posts: 7
    Yeah I guess thats why they call it life.
    Now more war pigs have the power
    Hand of god has struck the hour
    Begging mercy for their sins
    Satan laughing spreads his wings
    OH LORD YEAH!!!!!!
    Ozzy and Black Sabbath
  • wolfbearwolfbear Posts: 3,965
    Very good post. I really like it. It's all in how you read it, or your state of mind at the time. I can make it be happy or sad, so maybe I don't understand it. It makes me think of nature and life, and one thing we know at least is that you are alive.
    "I'd rather be with an animal." "Those that can be trusted can change their mind." "The in between is mine." "If I don't lose control, explore and not explode, a preternatural other plane with the power to maintain." "Yeh this is living." "Life is what you make it."
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