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Love in the darkness

Walking DeadmanWalking Deadman Posts: 7
edited October 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
In the darkest depths of hell
I hear her sigh
I seek her
I know her
Her Beatiful soft spoken words
soothe my very soul
Her eyes show me oceans of shades of love and happiness

Her smile reflects so beautifully off the oceans tide
To gaze into her eyes is to gaze at the heavens beautiful starlit night

She is my true love
She loves me so
Even with my heart of darkness
She can always find the key

She is my life
She is my soulmate
My Wife,My love in the darkness
Now more war pigs have the power
Hand of god has struck the hour
Begging mercy for their sins
Satan laughing spreads his wings
OH LORD YEAH!!!!!!
Ozzy and Black Sabbath
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  • violet rayviolet ray Posts: 502
    hail hail, deadman...

    i like this.
    You ask me to enter
    But then You make me crawl
    And I can't be holding on
    To what You got
    When all You've got is hurt
    ----
    Underneath this smile lies everything
    All my hopes and anger, pride and shame
  • Righteous JammerRighteous Jammer Posts: 509
    Oh I loved this poem....It made me smile ear to ear.. Soo thoughtful and loving...
    It doesnt hurt.... when I bleed
    but memories...they eat me
    I've seen it all before,...
    bring it on cause I'm no victim.
    -Ghost
  • Walking DeadmanWalking Deadman Posts: 7
    Thanx for the kind coments I've been writing for most of my life as such as my wife has also.
    Now more war pigs have the power
    Hand of god has struck the hour
    Begging mercy for their sins
    Satan laughing spreads his wings
    OH LORD YEAH!!!!!!
    Ozzy and Black Sabbath
  • twin2twin2 Posts: 894
    That was really sweet. It sounds like you are very in love. It's one of the more positive poems I've read here lately.
  • VEDHEAD27VEDHEAD27 Posts: 3,091
    Awwww that made me tear up!! Sooo gorgeous!!! This woman is way lucky to have someone like you. Man! If someone ever wrote words like that about me?!?! Whew. :o

    Gorgeous Walking Deadman. And hey, anyone that sneaks some "ocean" references up in the mix gets extra, EXTRA points. ;)
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    "Lo√e, you know the word
    ...YOU invented it!" ~ E√

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  • depopulationINCdepopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    I agree with all the posts...well done
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
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