Departure
bluejourneyman
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Traveling through fertile lands
he plants his seed in an unknown garden.
Tending his garden with life’s demands
he allows his feelings to harden.
Trying to remove weeds gently
from a garden he grows to detest.
His investment not taken lightly
he chooses not to abandon his harvest.
A total desire to take his harvest away.
The love for his garden is missing.
Kneeling at night to pray
his mind is left reminiscing.
.
He vowed never to leave his harvest behind.
He needs his life to be redefined.
he plants his seed in an unknown garden.
Tending his garden with life’s demands
he allows his feelings to harden.
Trying to remove weeds gently
from a garden he grows to detest.
His investment not taken lightly
he chooses not to abandon his harvest.
A total desire to take his harvest away.
The love for his garden is missing.
Kneeling at night to pray
his mind is left reminiscing.
.
He vowed never to leave his harvest behind.
He needs his life to be redefined.
Can't you see that there's light in the dark.
Nothing's quite what it seems in the city of dreams.
(Wolfmother)
~~~~~~~~~~~~
Grand Rapids 2006
Nothing's quite what it seems in the city of dreams.
(Wolfmother)
~~~~~~~~~~~~
Grand Rapids 2006
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beautiful ...sad..... beautiful....sad..... your writings that i have read make you an interesting person to me...i find myself thinking,wondering,what personal tragedies,losses,whatever it is...thats made your writing so beautiful...and so sad...i hope i wrote this in a way..that is not misunderstood ...cuz i in no way am criticizing...everything ive ever read by you...has touched me deeply.... and im not sure why...only i ponder maybe we both have suffered similar losses or the depth of pain of the loss..ok..im shutting up before i confuse myself more..thanks for sharing your poem.
it's only after you've lost everything ...that you are free to do anything....(Fight Club)
... I'll ride the wave...where it takes me....
beautiful ...sad..... beautiful....sad..... your writings that i have read make you an interesting person to me...i find myself thinking,wondering,what personal tragedies,losses,whatever it is...thats made your writing so beautiful...and so sad...i hope i wrote this in a way..that is not misunderstood ...cuz i in no way am criticizing...everything ive ever read by you...has touched me deeply.... and im not sure why...only i ponder maybe we both have suffered similar losses or the depth of pain of the loss..ok..im shutting up before i confuse myself more..thanks for sharing your poem.
it's only after you've lost everything ...that you are free to do anything....(Fight Club)
... I'll ride the wave...where it takes me....
beautiful ...sad..... beautiful....sad..... your writings that i have read make you an interesting person to me...i find myself thinking,wondering,what personal tragedies,losses,whatever it is...thats made your writing so beautiful...and so sad...i hope i wrote this in a way..that is not misunderstood ...cuz i in no way am criticizing...everything ive ever read by you...has touched me deeply.... and im not sure why...only i ponder maybe we both have suffered similar losses or the depth of pain of the loss..ok..im shutting up before i confuse myself more..thanks for sharing your poem.
it's only after you've lost everything ...that you are free to do anything....(Fight Club)
... I'll ride the wave...where it takes me....
That is why I love Pearl Jam so much
We are all in one big circle!
Nothing's quite what it seems in the city of dreams.
(Wolfmother)
~~~~~~~~~~~~
Grand Rapids 2006
it's only after you've lost everything ...that you are free to do anything....(Fight Club)
... I'll ride the wave...where it takes me....