Here it goes....

Dirty Mosquito

Ok, I am writing this as we speak so, I'm not sure how it will sound...

Do you ever feel misunderstood?
people not seeing what they should
hoping, wishing, wanting someone to understand
without fierce judgement or reprimands
Can't help but think to put on a front
But you gotta stay strong, true to yourself
letting the chips fall where they may.
Everything happens somehow some way
Perhaps just today won't be a good day
tomorrow is fresh, new to explore
it's life that you will have to endure
through good times and bad, can't all be right
just remember that there are good times in sight
life is crazy sometimes, sometimes a trip
no need to loose control and flip
Everything happens to mold who you are
Just think of an evolving star
Don't ever change who you are
or you'll forever forget who you are

-David F.

Thank you.

Dirty Mosquito

That was pretty lame. Next time I will post something worth posting.

Holey Ghost

...David

I like the part with the evolving star

yet...I think we're always changing (evolving, possibly discovering..who or what we are)

as nothing, ever really stays the same

very few constants in this universe

(the soul, the spiritual being, the one
who's awar of being aware...the essence of what we are, being one)

'cept maybe your name

after all, life itself is a game

with player, barriers, goals

bodies, minds, hearts and souls

PRfCTlYUNkPTCLtHs

I liked it.:)

YAY David!

deadnote

thanks

Dirty Mosquito

Thanks everyone. I appreciate the positive feedback. I was just unhappy because I know I can to better, but it was kind of a spur of the moment thing.

Holey Ghost

....that's okay David...I always seem to running by the seat of my pants and am overly impulsive and spur of the moment. Then I go back and clean up the mess...but no Edit here...so I really gotta watch my fingers and and the screen.

Dirty Mosquito

Holey Ghost wrote:

....that's okay David...I always seem to running by the seat of my pants and am overly impulsive and spur of the moment. Then I go back and clean up the mess...but no Edit here...so I really gotta watch my fingers and and the screen.

Right on.... I just posted "without a son" they are lyrics that I wrote in five mintues to music I wrote about a year and a half ago.. Still a work in progress.

Bu2

Dirty Mosquito wrote:

Do you ever feel misunderstood?
people not seeing what they should
hoping, wishing, wanting someone to understand
without fierce judgement or reprimands
Can't help but think to put on a front
But you gotta stay strong, true to yourself
letting the chips fall where they may.

I feel that way every day.....how the hell did you KNOW?!

Dirty Mosquito

Bu2 wrote:

I feel that way every day.....how the hell did you KNOW?!

I feel like that sometimes and especially the day I wrote this... thanks for reading.