Search this soul....

Sugar Ray

PJ has inspired a lot of things in me... one of them was a tattoo I got after a seperation from my wife (we are now back together and happy.. but that's another story) Anyway... the tattoo is the chinese characters that represent the final two lines in the chorus of the song I wrote below...

It's not even close lyrically what we get from our Icons... but I thought's I'd share it with you all... tell me what you think.


Chorus:
Search this soul
And know the man
Reach a little deeper
Know where I stand
Look into my eyes
It's easy to understand
that when you search this soul
You'll know the man.


It's not about looks
or what's pleasing the eye
It's not about money
and the toys you buy
It's looking for a heart
true as the sky
It's not as hard as you think,
C'mon just give it a try.

Chorus

Bridge:
When you find what you've been searching for
Oh how your life can change
perfect... without flaw
nothing to rearrange

Chorus X 2


Cheers,

R3

twin2

I like it. I think it sounds good.

Kovo

I write my poems with a beat in my head (I write them like lyrics). When I read it, it seemed like u do that too. Good poem.

Sugar Ray

Kovo wrote:

I write my poems with a beat in my head (I write them like lyrics). When I read it, it seemed like u do that too. Good poem.

Funny you should say that... I was only taking a shot in the dark for this one and I don't have a musical bone in my body... so really there wasn't a beat in my head, but I tried to find a tempo in the words... which may or may not be the same thing...

Anyway thanks for the kudos you two... it's appreciated.

Cheers,

R3

Ali

I like these lyrics alot.
Its hard to get to know someone...especially if youve been hurt in the past.

Maybe with this song...it could be an icebreaker for more couples trying to make it.



PS maybe itll give me luck for my man to find me:)