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depopulationINCdepopulationINC Posts: 2,074
edited January 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
And when you talk too much
And when you run with luck
And when you play to loose
And if you wouldn’t mind I’ll just dive right in

Is there a reason that
You wanna hurt so much
Is there a reason that
You love to live in shame
Is there a reason that
You can not be touched
Is there a reason that
You have to live like that

And if you give positive reinforcement a try
Can you wrap your mind around that
And if you give in to living your life for you
Do you think you can make the cut

Is there a reason that
You wanna live with all this pain
Is there a reason that
You live without expressing anything
Is there a reason that
You can give in to the world’s touch
Is there a reason that
You have to live like that

Give a try
Give a will
Give a hope
Live for dreams
Give a damn
Give a chance
Give a try
Live to be free
Give a prayer
Give a love
Give a sense
Live not like me
The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

And I won't make the same mistakes
(Because I know)
Because I know how much time that wastes
(And function)
Function is the key
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  • walkerlastgen1walkerlastgen1 Posts: 155
    I really dig this, although positive reinforcement is hard for me to rythmically wrap my mind around.
    I took a walk so I could curse my ass for being dumb!!!

    www.myspace.com/lastgeneration56
  • depopulationINCdepopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    walkerlastgen1 wrote:
    I really dig this, although positive reinforcement is hard for me to rythmically wrap my mind around.

    ;) aint it always
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
  • twin1twin1 Posts: 902
    This is really good depop...I like the way you worded it alot...I especially like the ending, it took a twist I did not expect...I was thinking "yeah, that's great" and than "OH!" :):)
    Our love must not be just words, but True Love, which shows itself in action,
    No one needs a smile more than someone who fails to give one,
    After you die...you know how to LIVE!
  • depopulationINCdepopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    twin1 wrote:
    This is really good depop...I like the way you worded it alot...I especially like the ending, it took a twist I did not expect...I was thinking "yeah, that's great" and than "OH!" :):)


    i like twists...

    ....would you call it an evil twist?

    I am all for evil twists
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
  • twin1twin1 Posts: 902
    depopulationINC wrote:
    i like twists...

    ....would you call it an evil twist?

    I am all for evil twists

    yeah...if you want to look at it that way...an evil twist it is... :)
    Our love must not be just words, but True Love, which shows itself in action,
    No one needs a smile more than someone who fails to give one,
    After you die...you know how to LIVE!
  • coachchriscoachchris Kelowna, British Columbia, Canada Posts: 749
    The ending was intense for me. It was almost as if I could picture someone screaming it. Thanks for sharing!!

    Give a try
    Give a will
    Give a hope
    Live for dreams
    Give a damn
    Give a chance
    Give a try
    Live to be free
    Give a prayer
    Give a love
    Give a sense
    Live not like me
    Adolescence in essence is all about trust.
    Leaving is for the answering machine.
  • depopulationINCdepopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    thanks........
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
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