a glimpse a vision

depopulationINCdepopulationINC Posts: 2,074
edited October 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
I can see you standing
Alone and scared
I wonder a little more
If your prepared
I drown away the sorrow
The suffering it brings
I can sense the burden
On heavy wings

But when your coughing
Dou you feel faint
And without laughing
Must take restraint
Covering all emotion
Sense no pain
Lost all devotion
Drives insane

Does this deficiency bring you down
Do you still have visions of another town
Will this be the best I see in you
Is this the end
Does you heart bleed threw

I see you tremble in your fear
This has been a bitter day
I don’t want to sit right here
While you disappear
I want to see you go away
Sense that worse is near
I don’t akin to you as prey
Are you really that astray
The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

And I won't make the same mistakes
(Because I know)
Because I know how much time that wastes
(And function)
Function is the key
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Comments

  • ISNISN Posts: 1,700
    good one Depop!!!! :)
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
  • VEDHEAD27VEDHEAD27 Posts: 3,091
    Oh wow!! That is VERY good! Loooved it. So good that is even left me cravin more more more.

    Nice job depopulationINC!
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    "Lo√e, you know the word
    ...YOU invented it!" ~ E√

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  • twin2twin2 Posts: 894
    That was good. It was so sad, it brought tears to my eyes.
  • thanks all....Its a different look at the Trixie post. I wasnt happy with that one, so I thought Id try again
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
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