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depopulationINCdepopulationINC Posts: 2,074
edited January 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
See your tremble
See your fear
Makes me gleeful
Brings me cheer
Sense your sorrow
Sense your pain
Feel you fighting
Oh what a game

I have come back to haunt you
I have come to see it through
So I never went away
You know that I am here to stay

I can feel it subdue me
I want you calmed
I’ll make it all come true

These little things are in my head
These little ways
This life I lead

See your tremble
See your fear
Makes me gleeful
Brings me cheer
Sense your sorrow
Sense your pain
Feel you fighting
Oh what a game

It doesn’t really bother me
I know that it does you
It doesn’t really bother me
I’m here to stay
To see it all through

Now consumes my every thought
This is it
It’s what I’ve brought
Knowing nothing else
No other way
Things are going to go my way

See your tremble
See your fear
Makes me gleeful
Brings me cheer
Sense your sorrow
Sense your pain
Feel you fighting
Oh what a game
The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

And I won't make the same mistakes
(Because I know)
Because I know how much time that wastes
(And function)
Function is the key
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  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    I like this, depop. :) It sounds to me as if this was written through the eyes of an abuser who got the boot but came back to lurk around his prey's (his ex's) door. It's creepy and sad because there are people like this out there! (At least that's what I got from it, I could be way off. :) )
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • twin1twin1 Posts: 902
    hmmm....sounds like my ex...alot like him actually...creepy read
    Our love must not be just words, but True Love, which shows itself in action,
    No one needs a smile more than someone who fails to give one,
    After you die...you know how to LIVE!
  • depopulationINCdepopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    ermm glad he is you ex now T

    yeah, I don't know for sure where this one came from

    it just spewed out
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
  • DowecheatemnhowDowecheatemnhow Posts: 158
    that was VERY interesting,... i'll have to give it another good read,...
    I can hear what you're thinking,.. All your doubts & fears,... If U look in my eye,... In time you'll find,... the reason I'm here,.. In time U may come back somday,.. To live once more-- or die once more-- In time your time,... will be no more,...
    Johnny Cash (to Frank Castle/The Punisher)
  • depopulationINCdepopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    It is starting to frustrate me. I have written alot of stuff lately, and all that is coming out is anger. I write like half a piece, stop, read it, freak myself out, and stop. My mind seems to be once again straying to dark places

    it is very strange. I don't know why all I can express of late is distain, anger and violence. perhaps I need a shrink.
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
  • DowecheatemnhowDowecheatemnhow Posts: 158
    ...maybe you might!! :D Just kidding,... I see that you've written many good pieces and UNLIKE YOU I WOULD'T DREAM OF BEING SARCASTIC AND TELL U TO SLOW YOUR ROLL!!! :-) U say others shouldn't spend so much time posting, and hear you are posting in a chaotic frenzy!!!!
    I can hear what you're thinking,.. All your doubts & fears,... If U look in my eye,... In time you'll find,... the reason I'm here,.. In time U may come back somday,.. To live once more-- or die once more-- In time your time,... will be no more,...
    Johnny Cash (to Frank Castle/The Punisher)
  • twin1twin1 Posts: 902
    depopulationINC wrote:
    It is starting to frustrate me. I have written alot of stuff lately, and all that is coming out is anger. I write like half a piece, stop, read it, freak myself out, and stop. My mind seems to be once again straying to dark places

    it is very strange. I don't know why all I can express of late is distain, anger and violence. perhaps I need a shrink.


    Take up boxing? Do you go to a gym - you could go get a sparring partner or just punch someone out at work. :) Kidding! Repressed stuff hugh? Perhaps it's just your way of venting, especially if you are stressed. Who doesn't get "dark" sometimes. It makes a good balance though - some are shiny happy people and others lean towards the darker side. Gives us variety and some people are more creative when they are in a dark mood. :)
    Our love must not be just words, but True Love, which shows itself in action,
    No one needs a smile more than someone who fails to give one,
    After you die...you know how to LIVE!
  • depopulationINCdepopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    Dowecheatemnhow wrote:
    ...maybe you might!! :D Just kidding,... I see that you've written many good pieces and UNLIKE YOU I WOULD'T DREAM OF BEING SARCASTIC AND TELL U TO SLOW YOUR ROLL!!! :-) U say others shouldn't spend so much time posting, and hear you are posting in a chaotic frenzy!!!!


    Yes I have posted heavily the last three days....a total of 9 new threads here in 3 days. I don't have an issue with people making a lot of threads. I suggested to somebody that they make one thread if they want to post dozens of pieces over a span of a few days, then put similar pieces together in a few threads. personally, I don't really care, I just stopped reading them.
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
  • DowecheatemnhowDowecheatemnhow Posts: 158
    this poem u wrote hit real close to home with me,... it was good,... just made me upset in a frenzy of emotion.
    I can hear what you're thinking,.. All your doubts & fears,... If U look in my eye,... In time you'll find,... the reason I'm here,.. In time U may come back somday,.. To live once more-- or die once more-- In time your time,... will be no more,...
    Johnny Cash (to Frank Castle/The Punisher)
  • depopulationINCdepopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    Dowecheatemnhow wrote:
    this poem u wrote hit real close to home with me,... it was good,... just made me upset in a frenzy of emotion.


    excellent..
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
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