gone

depopulationINC

Suddenly I feel
That nothing is for real
I wake up to yawn
For everything’s I know has gone
I sit there until about noon
Will it come back
Sometime soon

I persist the wake
I resist my fate
I walk and pace
I cant stand all this
I cant take the wait

Now I feel
So unhappy
Now I feel
Now I see
Now I know
Time to show
Say what you want
I gotto go

Nothing lasts forever anymore
I heard someone say that before
All in all
It all just disappears
Fear a gust
Because its gone with the wind
Feel the breeze
Watch it all fade away
I guess that shows
I guess that explains
Why it is
I see nothing more
I see nothing today

No sight to feel
No night to deal
Gone so fast
Nothing can last

Now I say
Hello
There the end
Now I yell out loud
Goodbye
My friend

This just can not be
Why is it happening
Not for real
Right there in front of me
Whats gone away
Sit and hope
Know it wont come back some day

Now and then I recall
How I sat and pondered
How I tried to solve it all
All for not
But still I tried
Times has come to realize
Squander it all
The end has no prize
What a shame to be blind
until the day I died

Righteous Jammer

This is a very well written poem...such passion and sorrow.... I loved it!

VEDHEAD27

I thought it was very good as well. So hopeless. Wow. I definitely think some of the greatest songs/poems are the sad ones. There is something so fragile, brutally real and extra beautiful about them. Very well captured emotions. It kinda hurt to read at some points, like "I just wanna hug depopulationINC" . hehe. Very nice work though. Thanks for sharing.

depopulationINC

thanks for the replies. I have allready started ripping this apart to 'fix' it a bit, but thankyou

Being Enlightened

I felt the helplessness too and I enjoyed reading this! Your rhymes were right on and I loved this part:

"I persist the wake
I resist my fate
I walk and pace
I cant stand all this
I cant take the wait"

I think once you "fix" it a little bitty bit, it'll be soopa doopa, depopINC!

kevinbeetle

Is it just coincidence that the new song is titled Gone as well?

Nice poem, nonetheless

depopulationINC

kevinbeetle wrote:

Is it just coincidence that the new song is titled Gone as well?

Nice poem, nonetheless

new song ?

ISN

Now and then I recall
How I sat and pondered
How I tried to solve it all
All for not
But still I tried
Times has come to realize
Squander it all
The end has no prize

really good Depop......watch out for a poem I'm going to try to compose which I got the idea for today......kinda along the same lines as the above quote....

depopulationINC

cant wait...where ya been?

ISN

I bin totally nowhere.....I live in cossetted ignorance nad bliss.....a kind of numb happiness......it's so much better than before........I'm so loving my new life......my solitariness........(you and others and my graceful and unruly child notwithstanding)

lovin kind

and still we shall write and wonder why and how
thats what i think i think for a brief moment anyway

depopulationINC

BTW, this was inspired by amazing grace

lovin kind

awesome writing, sounds a little sad
sad is good though
sometimes

twin2

Yes it is sad.

depopulationINC

lovin kind wrote:

awesome writing, sounds a little sad
sad is good though
sometimes

to compliment the depth is huge. TY kindly!

depopulationINC

twin2 wrote:

Yes it is sad.

Sad? I suppose you may have a point. Remember though, that I was inspired to right this by Amazing Grace

I once was blind
but now I see

maybe I did not potray what I wanted to.

anywhoo, thanks all