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24 (thanks B E)

depopulationINCdepopulationINC Posts: 2,074
edited January 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
I guess BE inspired me on this one. I don't think its done yet, but....


24

Yesterday’s yesterday said so much me
I laid on my back
Pondered the skies
There was so much I didn’t know
Yesterday’s yesterday’s yesterday said so much me
Oh how I’d never been there before
Still today I wonder
Still today I ponder
What will provide me more

But yesterday’s yesterday answered so much for me
No need to live a life of bore
Cause yesterday’s yesterday well it set me free
Know I have never been there before

Worry about tomorrow
It just doesn’t matter to me
The way it did before
Worry about tomorrow
There’s not much I can do
Not going to waste my time

24 years
And 24 days
Didn’t say much to me
But in 24 years
And 24 days
I’ll live so much more

24 hours
Might not seam a lot
But 24 thoughts
In 24 hours
Oh now they now mean much more

Because yesterday’s yesterday’s thoughts said so much to me
Everything I needed to hear and more
Because yesterday’s yesterday’s thoughts said one thing to me
There’s more to my day than just 24
So yesterday’s yesterday’s thoughts mean so much to me
24 hours don’t define me
24 hours is just one day
24 can bring so much more
Because yesterday’s yesterday said so much to me
This I know for sure
Because yesterday’s yesterday said so much to me
No I haven’t been here before
Because yesterday’s yesterday said so much to me
I know now there’s much more to live
Than just 24
The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

And I won't make the same mistakes
(Because I know)
Because I know how much time that wastes
(And function)
Function is the key
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Comments

  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    WOW! I don't know how I did it, but I was able to inspire that, depop????? :)
    Sheesh, thank YOU!!! Yesterday's yesterday says today's today and those 24 inspire 24 more and 24 more after that and it'll never be the same! :)

    Very inspiring poem in itself, depop! :) I love your poem, it's so positive!!! :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • depopulationINCdepopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    Being Enlightened wrote:
    WOW! I don't know how I did it, but I was able to inspire that, depop????? :)
    Sheesh, thank YOU!!! Yesterday's yesterday says today's today and those 24 inspire 24 more and 24 more after that and it'll never be the same! :)

    Very inspiring poem in itself, depop! :) I love your poem, it's so positive!!! :)

    thanks for the splendid reply. It was inspired by that quote of yours I loved and put in my signiture. I started looking at it. Every time I did I would get to thinking about how much it truly means/can mean. It inspired me to slap this together, so thanks.
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
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