Heart

depopulationINCdepopulationINC Posts: 2,074
edited October 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
I thought I would post this. I REALLY don't like it, it does not work for me at all, but, I got the main verses in my head, nad really want to do something with them (3rd and last verses). I might try something with them later, but had to post them as I just can't get them out of my head...hoping this helps.

Little miss must be gone
Left this town
So far gone

City lights
Shining bright
Walk alone
Through the night

When you left
So did I
Im still here
But not for real

Say
What I wanna hear you say
Mm m and be
Where I wanna see you be
Where are you taking me
Cause I know I’d rather be
Close to your heart

Footsteps taper
On the ground
I hear the creak
Is that your sound

Have you come
To break my heart
For its too late


Say
What I wanna hear you say
Mm m and be
Standing here with me
Don’t wanna set you free
Cause I know I’d rather be
Here with you in my arms
The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

And I won't make the same mistakes
(Because I know)
Because I know how much time that wastes
(And function)
Function is the key
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Comments

  • twin2twin2 Posts: 894
    That was so sweet and I loved it. I like that kind of stuff anyway. See, you're not as dark as you think.
  • Hark, what's that I hear??? Ah, yes, a heartbeat from the dark one!!! This is lovely! Stop disliking your lovey stuff, it's just as good as anything else you write and us gals, we get damp over this stuff! :p I mean, we get damp....around the eyes.!!! :D:D
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • Hark, what's that I hear??? Ah, yes, a heartbeat from the dark one!!! This is lovely! Stop disliking your lovey stuff, it's just as good as anything else you write and us gals, we get damp over this stuff! :p I mean, we get damp....around the eyes.!!! :D:D

    quote of the year

    Besides, I know I have a heart. The damned thing wakes me up all night with its annoying thumping.
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
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