I wont question

depopulationINCdepopulationINC Posts: 2,074
edited October 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
I wont question
What you feel inside
You change your mind
From time to time

And when your staring
Out at the blue
I ask one question
Just for you

Do you love me
Like back then
Do you love me
Like way back when
Do you love me
I give all of mine to you
Do you love me
Because heart still beats true

And as time passes
I see blank gaze
Are you dreaming
Of better days
And as im staring
I realize
All that matters
You are the prize

Do you love me
Like in the start
Do you love me
Is it in your heart
Do you love me
Does your heart beat true
Do you love me
Because I still love you
The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

And I won't make the same mistakes
(Because I know)
Because I know how much time that wastes
(And function)
Function is the key
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  • pacifierpacifier Posts: 1,009
    that is beautifull. really beautiful.
  • twin2twin2 Posts: 894
    I think that was beautiful too. It sure goes through your mind sometimes when you are in a long term relationship.
  • thanks. These types of posting still make me feel a bit off. I do enjoy writing them, but it still feels strange posting them...a guy thing I guess, maybe confidence...idunno, but thanks
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
  • pacifierpacifier Posts: 1,009
    thanks. These types of posting still make me feel a bit off. I do enjoy writing them, but it still feels strange posting them...a guy thing I guess, maybe confidence...idunno, but thanks

    don't feel weird about it. you are great at it. by the way, I like the title :D sounds familiar
  • thanks. These types of posting still make me feel a bit off. I do enjoy writing them, but it still feels strange posting them...a guy thing I guess, maybe confidence...idunno, but thanks


    great poem.
    by the way, who said guys cant write? don't feel strange, you did a good job.
    there'll be time for laughin'
    there's no time to cry
    soon i will be leavin'
    look me in the eye
    no matter what's in front of me
    it's your face that i'll see
  • Tom KTom K Posts: 842
    Wow man... what I'm going through now and this poem... unreal.. thanks for sharing..
    I'm gone ..Long gone..This time I'm letting go of it all...So long...Cause this time I'm gone
  • Tom K wrote:
    Wow man... what I'm going through now and this poem... unreal.. thanks for sharing..

    I am happy to hear that somebody can relate.
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
  • thanks. These types of posting still make me feel a bit off. I do enjoy writing them, but it still feels strange posting them...a guy thing I guess, maybe confidence...idunno, but thanks

    Oh, don't feel strange. It's amazing to see guys sharing real feelings and this poem was great! And like twin2 said, you have those moments of insecurity sometimes in a long term relationship, where you just need reassurance, even if you know deep down the other person loves you. Your poem expressed that feeling perfectly. :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • thanks Enlightened, you are all very supportive, thanks
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
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