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inside of me

depopulationINCdepopulationINC Posts: 2,074
edited October 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
All I got
For you
I feel inside
I can not deny
I can not lie
No
I
Can not hide

All IIIII
Got for you
Its what I feel
Its what I need
You can not conceive
Say what you want it to be
You know that you
Must
Believe

Your what Im waiting for
Never been here before
I just can not hide
It starts to hurt inside
now

And what I got for you
Oh can you feel it to
And if nothing more
Know that Ive never
Felt
This way
Before

What are we waiting for
Why must we ignore
This is not lust again
You know its
Driving
Me
Insane

So what are we waiting for
Why must we ignore
Within our passions lust
Oh in you I trust
This
must be
forever
more

Your what Im waiting for
Never been here before
I just can not hide
It starts to hurt inside
Now
Inside of all of me
Never been here before
Now
Inside of all of me
Now
Inside of all of me
The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

And I won't make the same mistakes
(Because I know)
Because I know how much time that wastes
(And function)
Function is the key
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  • violet rayviolet ray Posts: 502
    .................

    (sorry, wordless tonight...but i really enjoyed that)
    You ask me to enter
    But then You make me crawl
    And I can't be holding on
    To what You got
    When all You've got is hurt
    ----
    Underneath this smile lies everything
    All my hopes and anger, pride and shame
  • depopulationINCdepopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    thanks Vi.....
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
  • KovoKovo Posts: 255
    This would make a good acoustic song.
    I shouldn't have to fight a battle I'll never win, just to lose those I've never had.
  • depopulationINCdepopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    Kovo wrote:
    This would make a good acoustic song.


    Yeah, I had the Everlong acoustic (Best acoustic ever) stuck in my head when I wrote this.
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    INC...

    Nice.
    Dont you find it hard to talk about lust
    and what was.
    I DO!!!!
    Whats lust anyway??????!!!!


    a
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • depopulationINCdepopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    Ali wrote:
    INC...

    Nice.
    Dont you find it hard to talk about lust
    and what was.
    I DO!!!!
    Whats lust anyway??????!!!!


    a

    Lust = breasts with firm nipples. :) well, hey, it makes me lustful

    Yes I know...disgusting man pig.

    but seriously, this is not meant so much to be 'lustful' per say, or at least not what I view as lust.

    This is meant to say that though there is lust in this relationship, it does not feel like ones from the past. There is something more to it. I desire to be with that person on more than a physical level.

    No, I think it is great to talk about lust, passion and love.
    Lust provides motivation
    Passion keeps us alive
    Love gives us eternal hope
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
  • twin2twin2 Posts: 894
    You digusting "man pig"!






























    ......Just kidding.

    I like it. It's heartful and longing.
  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    depopulationINC wrote:
    Lust = breasts with firm nipples. :) well, hey, it makes me lustful

    Yes I know...disgusting man pig.

    but seriously, this is not meant so much to be 'lustful' per say, or at least not what I view as lust.

    This is meant to say that though there is lust in this relationship, it does not feel like ones from the past. There is something more to it. I desire to be with that person on more than a physical level.

    No, I think it is great to talk about lust, passion and love.
    Lust provides motivation
    Passion keeps us alive
    Love gives us eternal hope

    Oink! Oink! :p Ah, you're only having fun and there ain't nuthin' wrong with that! I'm curious, do you just want firm nipples or should the breasts they're attached to also be firm? :D Firm is a good lusty word, it's what I'm thinking of when I feel lusty. ;)

    I found that your poem was longing for something more than a meaningless romp in the hay. It was longing for the type of relationship where you get that warm embrace and that kiss on the face when you return home from a long day's work. :)

    Lust, passion and love make the world go 'round! :) Plus, the feelings they induce are great inspiration for writing poetry.
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • lovin kindlovin kind Posts: 268
    kind of reminds me of some lines in that song

    nice writing
    thanks to everyone who can read what i write without having to say something mean
  • depopulationINCdepopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    lovin kind wrote:
    kind of reminds me of some lines in that song

    nice writing


    I am not worthy of that compliment, but thanks.


    And thanks BE
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
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