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depopulationINCdepopulationINC Posts: 2,074
edited February 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Times to speak have faded away
From this wretched place
I tried to express my mind
But three voices would not let me be heard

Major scripts of one tracked minds
Plaster every page
Some old thing with endless rhyme
Never a second thought shown
Nothing else to be observed

Why I stay
Away
Why I stay
Gone today
Why I stay
I’m not
Why I stay
This is why I walk away

Now my mind seeks to learn
Nothing more from her
Someday I may try again
Hope she gets what she deserves

I hope that you realize
I don’t despise your every word
But you smother all the other lives
Out there to be heard

Everything I do feel
I wore it on my sleeve
Know that I hate your soul
The one that made me leave
The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

And I won't make the same mistakes
(Because I know)
Because I know how much time that wastes
(And function)
Function is the key
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  • pacifierpacifier Posts: 1,009
    who are the three voices?
  • depopulationINCdepopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    its nothing.

    just a cya piece

    my last thread me thinks
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
  • pacifierpacifier Posts: 1,009
    depopulationINC wrote:
    its nothing.

    just a cya piece

    my last thread me thinks

    No.
    No, don't go. even if you decide to not hang around these parts too much, I hope you still drop in for a visit. You know I find your poems some of the best. I always read them when I see them, even if I don't reply.

    On 2nd thoughts, do what is best for you. but no more of this numbness business, ok? really do what is BEST for you. I wish I could read something happy and hopeful from you and have it be true. I'm wishing you the best.
  • depopulationINCdepopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    pacifier wrote:
    No.
    No, don't go. even if you decide to not hang around these parts too much, I hope you still drop in for a visit. You know I find your poems some of the best. I always read them when I see them, even if I don't reply.

    On 2nd thoughts, do what is best for you. but no more of this numbness business, ok? really do what is BEST for you. I wish I could read something happy and hopeful from you and have it be true. I'm wishing you the best.


    I will stop by often. But, I don't see me posting anything here again. I will reply and what not, but I will not start threads here.
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
  • pacifierpacifier Posts: 1,009
    depopulationINC wrote:
    I will stop by often. But, I don't see me posting anything here again. I will reply and what not, but I will not start threads here.

    why not?



    .
  • pacifierpacifier Posts: 1,009
    whos soul do you hate?
  • depopulationINCdepopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    it was just a piece I spit out (for the most part). Wanted to do a last thread.

    And thanks for the nice comments. I am happy that you liked my writing.
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
  • pacifierpacifier Posts: 1,009
    depopulationINC wrote:
    it was just a piece I spit out (for the most part). Wanted to do a last thread.

    Well it sounds great, but it makes me want to know the cast :)

    curiousity has always been on of my major downfalls, as well as one of my greatest assests
  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    :( Aww, depop....I dunno, I've had those times when I decided that I wouldn't post here anymore...then I'd stop for awhile...but I always come back :). I hope you do too!!! I enjoy when you express your mind and I like your poetry very much . :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • coachchriscoachchris Kelowna, British Columbia, Canada Posts: 749
    Whatever you choose to do Depop is best for you, but please know, that so many times I've logged on simply to see if you had written anything new for me to read and get inspired from. I appreciate all your work and wish you the best. Thanks again for sharing!
    Adolescence in essence is all about trust.
    Leaving is for the answering machine.
  • twin1twin1 Posts: 902
    Depop you have fans here. I hope you reconsider. Your work is really good and creative and I enjoy it alot as well. It adds to this board and shows great talent. It makes you think and feel. I always read your stuff and look forward to it.
    Our love must not be just words, but True Love, which shows itself in action,
    No one needs a smile more than someone who fails to give one,
    After you die...you know how to LIVE!
  • depopulationINCdepopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    thanks. If things change, I may post again. until then, I will go elsewhere. I rather like this board and the great variety of people on it, but the lack of moderation forces me to go somewhere that will address problems. I believe that there was a significant problem addressed by the mods here, but it did not fix the problem.
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
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