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depopulationINCdepopulationINC Posts: 2,074
edited May 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
When all else fails
Will you loose your mind
Will hide your soul
Leave it all behind

When it all
Comes undone
Will you stand and fight
Will you turn and run

All in all
Its all begun
All you know
It wont be fun
All in all
Its come undone
All you hear
Is all unsung

When no one hears you anymore
Will you stand alone
Will they here your roar
Or the unseen timid ghost
The kind that never rocks the boat

Will you sit there ever quietly
Will you raise your arms triumphantly
Sit in the shadow
A molding stone
Never do it
Don’t hide at home
Don’t be the one to sit and cower
Make the stake
Might win the hour

All in all
Its all begun
All you know
It wont be fun
All in all
Its come undone
All you hear
Is all unsung
The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

And I won't make the same mistakes
(Because I know)
Because I know how much time that wastes
(And function)
Function is the key
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  • twin2twin2 Posts: 894
    I like that poem. It shows alot of hope and strength.
  • depopulationINCdepopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    thanks, its kinda about some stuff that is happenning in my life right now, I went 3 and a half days with a smile on my face about 5 weeks ago. That is the first time that that has happenned in three years come this October. I went on holidays, it was great. I guess that one should expect when so much posative is happenning, it will come to a crashing halt. I have a grim few weeks since. Through my depression, I realized that I wanted to smile. I wanted to feel good about myself, and stand up for whats right. So...I have really been "rocking the boat" because there are people, especially at work, who needed it to happen. My future is now more uncertain than I ever remember, and it feels great!
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
  • FinsburyParkCarrotsFinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    They'd make good lyrics, you know.
  • depopulationINCdepopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    FinsburyParkCarrots wrote:
    They'd make good lyrics, you know.

    you think so? I was just kind of venting.
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
  • pacifierpacifier Posts: 1,009
    Cool. I like it. but then agrain I like most of what you write :)
  • depopulationINCdepopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    turns out, this recording might be our best to date. We are considerring making a demo, but there have been a lot of dissagreements lately, so I dont know
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
  • pacifierpacifier Posts: 1,009
    depopulationINC wrote:
    turns out, this recording might be our best to date. We are considerring making a demo, but there have been a lot of dissagreements lately, so I dont know

    you should let us all hear what it sounds like if you get around to doing that
  • twin2twin2 Posts: 894
    depopulationINC wrote:
    thanks, its kinda about some stuff that is happenning in my life right now, I went 3 and a half days with a smile on my face about 5 weeks ago. That is the first time that that has happenned in three years come this October. I went on holidays, it was great. I guess that one should expect when so much posative is happenning, it will come to a crashing halt. I have a grim few weeks since. Through my depression, I realized that I wanted to smile. I wanted to feel good about myself, and stand up for whats right. So...I have really been "rocking the boat" because there are people, especially at work, who needed it to happen. My future is now more uncertain than I ever remember, and it feels great!


    Do what's in your heart. It sounds like you already are. Change can be a very good thing.
  • depopulationINCdepopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    twin2 wrote:
    Do what's in your heart. It sounds like you already are. Change can be a very good thing.


    I agree, and yes I am. I have made some significant changes in my life recently, plus I bought some milk.
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
  • twin2twin2 Posts: 894
    depopulationINC wrote:
    I agree, and yes I am. I have made some significant changes in my life recently, plus I bought some milk.


    Well, good. Your bones should be nice and strong than.
  • trinityelizatrinityeliza Posts: 426
    depopulationINC wrote:
    I agree, and yes I am. I have made some significant changes in my life recently, plus I bought some milk.

    Always stand up and fight for what is right!!! Win or lose it doesn't matter the outcome!!! That is where I come from...
    Put me in coach...I'm ready to
    Fuck up...the USA...
    Look at me...I can rig...
    The presidency!!!!
  • depopulationINCdepopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    twin2 wrote:
    Well, good. Your bones should be nice and strong than.

    yes. Milk is good. I dont really drink it a lot, but I have discovered it it goes great with Kahlua, Vodka and Coke.
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
  • depopulationINCdepopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    trinityeliza wrote:
    Always stand up and fight for what is right!!! Win or lose it doesn't matter the outcome!!! That is where I come from...

    dang dang...you know you're right
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
  • twin2twin2 Posts: 894
    depopulationINC wrote:
    yes. Milk is good. I dont really drink it a lot, but I have discovered it it goes great with Kahlua, Vodka and Coke.



    I'd rather have a white russian.
  • depopulationINCdepopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    twin2 wrote:
    I'd rather have a white russian.

    Im a white russian...wink wink

    lol
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
  • twin2twin2 Posts: 894
    depopulationINC wrote:
    Im a white russian...wink wink

    lol

    Uh huh! I thought you were Irish.
  • depopulationINCdepopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    twin2 wrote:
    Uh huh! I thought you were Irish.

    I am,
    I'm half Irish, half Russian, Half German.
    Well, I guess I am technically 100% Canadian.
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
  • twin2twin2 Posts: 894
    depopulationINC wrote:
    I am,
    I'm half Irish, half Russian, Half German.
    Well, I guess I am technically 100% Canadian.


    Wow. You are a combo too. I guess technically I am 100% American.
    I have dutch, welch (spelling???), German, Czec (Spelling???),and Irish. Don't know what else. It's a damn shame I don't know how to spell any of them either.
  • depopulationINCdepopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    twin2 wrote:
    Wow. You are a combo too. I guess technically I am 100% American.
    I have dutch, welch (spelling???), German, Czec (Spelling???),and Irish. Don't know what else. It's a damn shame I don't know how to spell any of them either.

    LOL, good stuff.
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
  • depopulationINCdepopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    When you breath
    Is that normal
    Can you speak
    Just how you really feel
    Can you show
    Will you run to hide
    Does it grow inside
    Are you in a void
    Are you staring towards belief
    How far along
    When will you commence release

    I can feel it
    Grows inside of me
    I can feel it
    Rising up
    Reaching the surface
    Growing out on me
    Blistered skin
    Hide the new beginning
    Another layer
    Shedding off
    Exposing my new skin

    I am mine
    Slipping out
    Come to be exposed
    Shed my shell
    Release inside
    Adapting to my growth
    A new man
    Creature now a being
    What I was
    What will I be
    Where I’m at
    Where I’ll be set free
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
  • walkerlastgen1walkerlastgen1 Posts: 155
    powerfull lyrics bro..."sell me a cure" on our myspace page has the same theme... kind of a rage vibe.. I'd like to hear your music.. can you send me a link?
    I took a walk so I could curse my ass for being dumb!!!

    www.myspace.com/lastgeneration56
  • california girlcalifornia girl Posts: 70
    depopulationINC wrote:
    When you breath
    Is that normal
    Can you speak
    Just how you really feel
    Can you show
    Will you run to hide
    Does it grow inside
    Are you in a void
    Are you staring towards belief
    How far along
    When will you commence release

    I can feel it
    Grows inside of me
    I can feel it
    Rising up
    Reaching the surface
    Growing out on me
    Blistered skin
    Hide the new beginning
    Another layer
    Shedding off
    Exposing my new skin

    I am mine
    Slipping out
    Come to be exposed
    Shed my shell
    Release inside
    Adapting to my growth
    A new man
    Creature now a being
    What I was
    What will I be
    Where I’m at
    Where I’ll be set free

    i'm exhausted...
  • coachchriscoachchris Kelowna, British Columbia, Canada Posts: 749
    trinityeliza wrote:
    Always stand up and fight for what is right!!! Win or lose it doesn't matter the outcome!!! That is where I come from...

    I just recently told my wife that "regardless if you agree or disagree with me, if you see that I'm truly passionate about what I'm pursuing, encourage me"

    Not sure if that makes any sense to anyone....but kinda ties into what trinity said :)
    Adolescence in essence is all about trust.
    Leaving is for the answering machine.
  • depopulationINCdepopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    california girl wrote:
    i'm exhausted...


    :)..........................
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
  • twin1twin1 Posts: 902
    Powerful! Awesome stuff! Growing and changing, being motivated...gotta luv' it... :):)
    Our love must not be just words, but True Love, which shows itself in action,
    No one needs a smile more than someone who fails to give one,
    After you die...you know how to LIVE!
  • twin1twin1 Posts: 902
    I read the rest of the thread...toasted almonds, those are awesome drinks too, taste like fruity peebles cereal to me... :)
    Our love must not be just words, but True Love, which shows itself in action,
    No one needs a smile more than someone who fails to give one,
    After you die...you know how to LIVE!
  • riantLoVEsuriantLoVEsu Posts: 74
    Will you sit there ever quietly
    Will you raise your arms triumphantly/o]

    nope, not me
    9inched fuxed ulike an animal
    so keep on grinnin' sonny b oy


    loles


    ok, so?

    so what?

    ...
  • riantLoVEsuriantLoVEsu Posts: 74
    sorry,

    i am mean..........

    sorry...ok?



    i M am mean to tell you
    pearl jam bread n butter me!!~~~

    so fucking what? (man!) :)
  • riantLoVEsuriantLoVEsu Posts: 74
    Can you show
    Will you run to hide
    Does it grow inside
    Are you in a void

    losing it
    losing you

    oh shit
    not again

    fuck u like if u ever knew what grew inside of me???
    you really dont know this spin
    ]fux u all up \
    just for the sake of it

    no, my skin aint that thick\
    I cried so many bucket (dylan)
    maybe I wi.ll
    maybe I wont
    let u in

    :)



    laughs at all that shit*
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