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depopulationINCdepopulationINC Posts: 2,074
edited September 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Golden rays of sunlight
Sparkle everywhere
Waves cast side to side
Fragrance soon sweeps in
Nostrils filled
The sweet perfume
Fields swaying in the wind
Feel softness at a touch
Growing warm within
Is this majestic
A country scene
Or just the perfection of your hair
The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

And I won't make the same mistakes
(Because I know)
Because I know how much time that wastes
(And function)
Function is the key
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  • twin2twin2 Posts: 894
    That was nice.
  • I felt so cheesy sharing it. I usually don't share this sort of writing with anyone
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
  • it feels "mushy"
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
  • twin2twin2 Posts: 894
    I felt so cheesy sharing it. I usually don't share this sort of writing with anyone

    Why? It's good...and some of us enjoy reading that kind of stuff.
  • well, I thank you. Pehaps I should start posting some of my stuff that is not so 'grim'. I just tend to post it, because it is mostly lyrics, and thats what im into right now. I guess I should dig into my poetry books a bit. :)
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
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