need a tittle

depopulationINC

Im not done this yet, and I need a tittle, but:

My love for you seemed so bleak
You were my target
The one to seek
I subdued all my anger
Laid on the beach
I need to drown my sorrow
I drank shots of bleach

Feel
Pain
Why does my heart ache
Waiting here for you to arrive
Sting
Ache
Why’d you leave me in this state
Waiting for this act to end
Feel
Pain
Why’d you flip me in your wake
Nothing here for me

Your love for me has gone astray
I stood along side you
You walked his way
I subdued my anger
It was in reach
I want to light my mood
I drink this dye

Light
Bright
This will be my last blast
I see it come my way
Fright
Sight
I prepare for my last breathe
This will be the last day
Spent
Bent
You were the cause of this
Pain for you I pray

My love for you seemed so bleak
You were my target
The one to seek
I subdued all my anger

violet ray

i just replied somewhere else that you guys put my feelings into words all the time... past, present, doesn't matter.

here's another example.

twin2

"I need to drown my sorrow
I drank shots of bleach"

Oh my God! That sounds pretty harsh. I know someone who drank antifreeze once and the only thing that saved his life was all the alcohol in his system (true story).

depopulationINC

Thanks Violet, glad you liked it.

No, I do not think that drinking bleach is the best idea, but it is meant to convey cleaning...bleach and fire are the 2 most resilient cleaners. It was not a literal reference