PLN n ME

depopulationINCdepopulationINC Posts: 2,074
edited October 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
I feel the pain
I need to fix
I fill with sorrow
From the lives you took

I feel surrounded
By prayers from friends
I sense concerns
About where I’ve been

They know it’s hard
And this day's the worst
They try to comfort
Take away the hurt

Its coming soon now
They day that aches
Each one to come
Will hopefully pass
Each one that goes
Despairingly may last

With it in my mind
I try so hard
It’s just not easy
To leave it all behind

One fast moment
Just give some more gas
It’s a sharp corner
But we can take it fast

A new corner in my life
Which way to turn
I’ve been down that road before
But I fear I will return



to P, L , N

I hope there is peace
and no more pain
I pray for it daily
likely in vein
I wish it was diferrent
each day is the same
thinking of that day
wish I could see you again

H
The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

And I won't make the same mistakes
(Because I know)
Because I know how much time that wastes
(And function)
Function is the key
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Comments

  • twin2twin2 Posts: 894
    Think positive and have faith in yourself. Strength to overcome lies beneath the surface. I really like this one (as I do most all of them). It shows a struggle but also a choice.
  • thanks,

    Its goes hand in hand with bleed through it, and my "issue"
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
  • I feel
    All pain
    I need
    My fix
    I fill
    With sorrow
    From lives
    You never took

    I feel
    Encased
    By prayers
    That friends make
    I sense
    Profound concerns
    In regards
    To where I’ve been

    They know
    It so hard
    And this day
    It comes first
    They try to
    Provide comfort
    Take away
    All my hurt
    Today
    It hurts the worst

    Its coming
    So soon now
    They day that aches
    Each one
    To come
    I do hope
    It will pass
    Each one
    To go by
    Despairingly just may last

    With it
    In my mind
    I try
    So hard
    It’s just not
    Not easy
    To leave it
    All behind

    One fast moment
    Just give some more gas
    It’s a sharp corner
    But we can
    We shall
    Take it fast

    A new corner
    In my mind
    Which way
    To turn
    Left
    That road is behind
    Right
    I fear my return
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
  • twin2twin2 Posts: 894
    I liked both versions actually.
  • thanks Twin
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
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