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depopulationINCdepopulationINC Posts: 2,074
edited October 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
I do feel
That you feel the same
I know
That you want this to be real
I give
The better part of me
I live
For you to be with me

Can you hear the river flowing on to me
Light shattered sparkles
Like your eyes I see in dreams
Do you paddle closer to my shore
Current pushing you away
I beg you try some more

I do feel
That you feel the same
I know
That you want this to be real
I give
The better part of me
I live
For you to be with me

Please swim into my proximity
Struggle with your might
I wait so eagerly
If you dare to open up your heart
It gives us a chance
Gives us a place to start
The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

And I won't make the same mistakes
(Because I know)
Because I know how much time that wastes
(And function)
Function is the key
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  • thunder_ballsthunder_balls Posts: 117
    Pretty. Meaningful. Nice. I've noticed you've been writing a lot of damn good shit. I must say, I love 'em all. I'm a big fan..haha. Keep it comin' for your fans!
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  • twin2twin2 Posts: 894
    I really like this one depop. It's sweet and longing. Your dark poems are nice but your sweet ones are like sugar (no and that doesn't make you a "girlie-man" or too mushy).
  • depopulationINCdepopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    Thanks, but what if I wanna be a girlie-man? lol

    I am glad you like it.
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
  • depopulationINCdepopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    thunder_balls wrote:
    Pretty. Meaningful. Nice. I've noticed you've been writing a lot of damn good shit. I must say, I love 'em all. I'm a big fan..haha. Keep it comin' for your fans!


    Well, I don't know if your being serious or not, because this is mindless dribble compared to alot of the posts on here, but thanks.
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
  • twin2twin2 Posts: 894
    depopulationINC wrote:
    Thanks, but what if I wanna be a girlie-man? lol

    I am glad you like it.


    Then you go right ahead and be a "girlie-man". Whatever floats your boat.
  • depopulationINCdepopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    twin2 wrote:
    Then you go right ahead and be a "girlie-man". Whatever floats your boat.

    My "Little Friend" floats my boat!

    :)
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
  • twin2twin2 Posts: 894
    depopulationINC wrote:
    My "Little Friend" floats my boat!

    :)


    lmfao! Well, he is loyal you know. He stands up for you and grows on you........
  • depopulationINCdepopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    twin2 wrote:
    lmfao! Well, he is loyal you know.

    YES! One might say we are very close. He always sticks up for me. I hope to god we never part.....that would REALLY suck.

    K, I am creapin myself out now.
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
  • twin2twin2 Posts: 894
    depopulationINC wrote:
    YES! One might say we are very close. He always sticks up for me. I hope to god we never part.....that would REALLY suck.

    K, I am creapin myself out now.


    You are too funny.
  • chromiamchromiam Posts: 4,114
    depopulationINC wrote:
    Please swim into my proximity
    Struggle with your might
    I wait so eagerly
    If you dare to open up your heart
    It gives us a chance
    Gives us a place to start

    I love those lines. Its what everyone really wants.. a chance
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  • depopulationINCdepopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    chromiam wrote:
    I love those lines. Its what everyone really wants.. a chance

    There is a chance that I love that you love those lines!
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
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