Would

depopulationINCdepopulationINC Posts: 2,074
edited October 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Would you like if I did those things with you
Would you like it if I always followed through
Tell me
The reason
Why you have come to think this way
Tell me
The reason
Why you always lead my mind astray

Don’t you
Know that
My world revolves around more than just you
Don’t you
See that
My heart has been loyal through and through

And if you open your ears don’t you know I’ll prove
Why close your min
You seem to enjoy shutting out my truth
And if you are willing to just listen to me
You might open your eyes
You might realize that I’m not asking to be set free

Can you
See that
Strong control only smothers me
Can you
Give in
Let me do my own thing at ease

Would you like if I did the same to you
Would you like it if I questioned all you do
Tell me
The season
What it will take to make you think minutely liberally
Tell me
The purpose
That your pressure brings for me
The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

And I won't make the same mistakes
(Because I know)
Because I know how much time that wastes
(And function)
Function is the key
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  • twin2twin2 Posts: 894
    "Can you
    See that
    Strong control only smothers me
    Can you
    Give in
    Let me do my own thing at ease

    Would you like if I did the same to you
    Would you like it if I questioned all you do
    Tell me
    The season
    What it will take to make you think minutely liberally
    Tell me
    The purpose
    That your pressure brings for me"

    What's funny about this one is I am guilty of this (questioning and pressuring) at times and on the other hand, I know how it feels to be on the receiving end. Good one. It made me stop and think.
  • twin2twin2 Posts: 894
    Oops! See above.
  • creative destruction
    they love to kill
    one way frustration
    making me ill
    giving into temptation
    will i lose my soul
    searching for salvation
    to make me whole
    creative destruction
    they love to kill
  • great additions/replies
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
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