reliveit

depopulationINCdepopulationINC Posts: 2,074
edited November 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Have you never
Seen something like this
Before
How it haunts you
Makes you scream out
Forever
More

And what it does to you
As it is supposed to
Make you cry and scream
During every rest
Through every single dream

And whats more
It never goes away
For whats left
It will haunt
Your every
Day

You don’t run to hide
Because you know inside
There is nowhere to go
It will be upon you
Forever
More

And what it does to you
As it is supposed to
Make you cry and scream
During every rest
Through every single dream

When you beg for no more
What is all this effort for
This is all here to stay
Through each and every day
Its haunts you by
The minute

And if for once you subside the pain
It will all be in vane
Just like the moments before
Memories never cease to revive
You shall relive the pain
Time and time again
Forever
You will
Re-live it

This will not subside
You know just where you’ll go
Upon
The day
You die

And what it does to you
As it is supposed to
Make you cry and scream
During every rest
Through every single dream

This will not subside
You know just where you’ll go
Upon
The day
You die
The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

And I won't make the same mistakes
(Because I know)
Because I know how much time that wastes
(And function)
Function is the key
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Comments

  • twin2twin2 Posts: 894
    This is well written but disturbing.
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    Inc...

    Nice...AND...reliving the pain is the hardest part...especially when youre trying not to.

    Great thinking one:)
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • twin2 wrote:
    This is well written but disturbing.

    thanks.

    Post script
    tried to reply, PMs are full
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
  • twin2twin2 Posts: 894
    thanks.

    Post script
    tried to reply, PMs are full


    Oh. Sorry. I erased some.
  • Ali wrote:
    Inc...

    Nice...AND...reliving the pain is the hardest part...especially when youre trying not to.

    Great thinking one:)

    it sure can be
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
  • twin1twin1 Posts: 902
    That one was very tortured...sad but well written
    Our love must not be just words, but True Love, which shows itself in action,
    No one needs a smile more than someone who fails to give one,
    After you die...you know how to LIVE!
  • pacifierpacifier Posts: 1,009
    hmmm, for someone whos dreams mainly consist of nightmares, it described how I feel at times.

    I really liked it. Well written.
  • pacifier wrote:
    hmmm, for someone whos dreams mainly consist of nightmares, it described how I feel at times.

    I really liked it. Well written.

    ty Ms Pacman
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
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