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depopulationINCdepopulationINC Posts: 2,074
edited December 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
something I started yesterday. It is not complete yet, but really wanted to share what I had...it is a tribute of sorts to CC


Listen to that mighty crowd
I think that we should play it load
We will just scream in tone
We will make this bar our home

I have this master plan
I’ll have a following
I’ll have a clan
Then when it all sinks in
True torment shall begin

And when I’ve sung it all
I’ll nook down like jimi
I’ll end it all

This is all a master plan
I’ll kill the movement
I’ll stun the fan
The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

And I won't make the same mistakes
(Because I know)
Because I know how much time that wastes
(And function)
Function is the key
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  • twin1twin1 Posts: 902
    That's powerful!
    Our love must not be just words, but True Love, which shows itself in action,
    No one needs a smile more than someone who fails to give one,
    After you die...you know how to LIVE!
  • twin2twin2 Posts: 894
    I found it to be powerful as well.
  • depopulationINCdepopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    perhaps I should try completing it
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
  • twin1twin1 Posts: 902
    depopulationINC wrote:
    perhaps I should try completing it

    perhaps you should...
    Our love must not be just words, but True Love, which shows itself in action,
    No one needs a smile more than someone who fails to give one,
    After you die...you know how to LIVE!
  • depopulationINCdepopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    don't know if it's done....but here it is anyways....


    Two pints
    Too small
    Going to live tall
    This town
    To all
    Living unseen
    My world
    Not yours
    Laugh because you’re here now
    These chores
    You in words
    Love that stupid grin

    Wake up
    What’s more
    I made it
    I’m here now
    Blow up
    Just sell it
    My soul
    To the world

    All this has come
    As it comes to a trend
    All this has come
    Oh these phony friends
    All this has come
    All this has come
    All this has come

    Watch it all end

    Listen to that mighty crowd
    I think that we should play it load
    We will just scream in tone
    We will make this bar our home

    I have this master plan
    I’ll have a following
    I’ll have a clan
    Then when it all sinks in
    True torment shall begin

    And when I’ve sung it all
    I’ll nook down like jimi
    I’ll end it all

    This is all a master plan
    I’ll kill the movement
    I’ll stun the fan

    Nowhere to go
    Nowhere to go
    I'm so trapped in
    Nowhere to go
    Nowhere to go
    Watch it begin
    Nowhere to go
    Nowhere to go
    Hate this light
    Nowhere to go
    Nowhere to go
    You all wait
    Your going to loose sight

    You know you see me now
    You know you act so proud
    You know you see me now
    Where were you back then

    You know you see me now
    You know you act so proud
    You know you see me now
    Always looked beyond
    Now don’t call me your friend

    I see
    I see my light
    I know
    I know it’s here tonight
    I see
    I see the light
    I know
    I know it shines bright

    Watch it shine
    Growing bright
    In your minds
    A joyful sight
    Undesired growth
    Not as it seems
    Cherished words
    Shattered dreams

    Watch it grown
    Beyond my scene
    Question why
    Not apart of my dream
    It has to wither
    That’s part of life
    It has to go
    I’ll stay on top
    Leave right now
    Potential futures
    Will be your thought
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
  • twin1twin1 Posts: 902
    Powerful piece depop. Funny also - two pints too small and we will make this bar our home. It seems very bigger than life and "take all or nothing".
    Our love must not be just words, but True Love, which shows itself in action,
    No one needs a smile more than someone who fails to give one,
    After you die...you know how to LIVE!
  • depopulationINCdepopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    thanks twin

    I still don't think its done, but it is closer
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
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