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all of your love

depopulationINCdepopulationINC Posts: 2,074
edited November 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
All I want
Where do I start
All I need
Not much
Indeed

Take a look around
It surrounds me
Take a look around
Still profound me

Need a little something
Gotta be ethical
Want something special
Hope it turns out wonderful
Gotta have a little
Gotta be impractical
And harsh

Wanna give a little
Of my love
Wanna get a little
As above
Wanna see a little
Thinking of
Thinking of

I want more
Much more
I need more
Much more
I want more
Than what you call
All of your love

No more
No more
Not waiting around
No more
No more
The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

And I won't make the same mistakes
(Because I know)
Because I know how much time that wastes
(And function)
Function is the key
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  • trinityelizatrinityeliza Posts: 426
    that's truly a bee-you-tea-full piece of art. at first i thought it was a song i've heard, but i'm assuming if you hadn't written it,... you'd say so-yes???
    i liked this one a lot.
    Put me in coach...I'm ready to
    Fuck up...the USA...
    Look at me...I can rig...
    The presidency!!!!
  • depopulationINCdepopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    trinityeliza wrote:
    that's truly a bee-you-tea-full piece of art. at first i thought it was a song i've heard, but i'm assuming if you hadn't written it,... you'd say so-yes???
    i liked this one a lot.

    yes I would. and thanks Trin
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
  • twin1twin1 Posts: 902
    Good one depop, I like this one alot!
    Our love must not be just words, but True Love, which shows itself in action,
    No one needs a smile more than someone who fails to give one,
    After you die...you know how to LIVE!
  • trinityelizatrinityeliza Posts: 426
    depopulationINC wrote:
    yes I would. and thanks Trin

    bee-you-tea-full ;D
    Put me in coach...I'm ready to
    Fuck up...the USA...
    Look at me...I can rig...
    The presidency!!!!
  • depopulationINCdepopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    cmon now, I will blush
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
  • twin1twin1 Posts: 902
    depopulationINC wrote:
    cmon now, I will blush

    Awwhhh, ain't that cute!
    Our love must not be just words, but True Love, which shows itself in action,
    No one needs a smile more than someone who fails to give one,
    After you die...you know how to LIVE!
  • depopulationINCdepopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    twin1 wrote:
    Awwhhh, ain't that cute!

    handsome...its handsome...and manly
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
  • twin1twin1 Posts: 902
    depopulationINC wrote:
    handsome...its handsome...and manly

    O.k, I am very sorry, time to smooth ego - handsome, very handsome and manly! better?
    Our love must not be just words, but True Love, which shows itself in action,
    No one needs a smile more than someone who fails to give one,
    After you die...you know how to LIVE!
  • depopulationINCdepopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    twin1 wrote:
    O.k, I am very sorry, time to smooth ego - handsome, very handsome and manly! better?

    its too late now. my ego is very fragile.

    Oh how I hope it mends :(
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
  • twin2twin2 Posts: 894
    Another good one.
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    I like this one.
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  • twin1twin1 Posts: 902
    depopulationINC wrote:
    its too late now. my ego is very fragile.

    Oh how I hope it mends :(

    O.k., here is a bandaid for you...all better...
    Our love must not be just words, but True Love, which shows itself in action,
    No one needs a smile more than someone who fails to give one,
    After you die...you know how to LIVE!
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    Very touching.
    as I say...
    "All Of My LOve",
    allison:)
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • pacifierpacifier Posts: 1,009
    "I want more
    Than what you call
    All of your love"

    I like this part inparticular

    never give up on this goal. It's a good one.
  • depopulationINCdepopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    thanks all
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
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