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depopulationINCdepopulationINC Posts: 2,074
edited November 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Please don’t believe me
I’m not myself
Recoiled in my corner
With shadows
Shattering calm
Memories
Ruffled by their lash
Down to just my one
Occupied by all three
Conquered by a moment
Smothered
By a raging sea
How I wish it overcomes
Surmount to more than dreams
How shall you not forsake me
Merit that moment
Why pass on by
Just let that moment be known
Satisfy
Don’t hesitate
I beg
Don’t just let this all come and go
The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

And I won't make the same mistakes
(Because I know)
Because I know how much time that wastes
(And function)
Function is the key
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  • twin1twin1 Posts: 902
    There is a pleading sense to this one. Good read Depop!
    Our love must not be just words, but True Love, which shows itself in action,
    No one needs a smile more than someone who fails to give one,
    After you die...you know how to LIVE!
  • depopulationINCdepopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    thanks...thinking of going in a bit of a new direction, but who knows.
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
  • EvilToasterElfEvilToasterElf Posts: 1,119
    Step one is to work out the rhyme, but step two, the hardest part, is to work out the abstractions

    shadows shattering calm memories - of what, which shadows, why do the shadows have the power to shatter anything

    dreams of what, etc...

    There is power in small things, small moments, small sights, small thoughts.
  • depopulationINCdepopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    EvilToasterElf wrote:
    Step one is to work out the rhyme, but step two, the hardest part, is to work out the abstractions

    shadows shattering calm memories - of what, which shadows, why do the shadows have the power to shatter anything

    dreams of what, etc...

    There is power in small things, small moments, small sights, small thoughts.


    so very true...
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
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