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A drop
Single prism
Cast astray the light
Due
A lifespan
A lifetime
No longer prolonged
Do
As is
What is meant
And no more
Sprawling from its kingdom
Cast away from paradise’s gates
A universe shattered
Momentum
Only destined for the floor
Whisking
Air gushing on bye
Forming
The crystal pearl
Flowing
With the freedom
That only comes with flight
Falling
Ever closer
Yet will no longer be a sight
Ripples
Echo on the sand
Glimmer
The faintest hope
Of good fortune
The collection of like friends
Cast from heaven
An ungodly toss?
A spirit lost?
Tranquility
To moisten earth
And transform disparity
For grateful anticipation
For heaven has prolonged the entrance of more
A drop
Single prism
Cast astray the light
Due
A lifespan
A lifetime
No longer prolonged
Do
As is
What is meant
And no more
Sprawling from its kingdom
Cast away from paradise’s gates
A universe shattered
Momentum
Only destined for the floor
Whisking
Air gushing on bye
Forming
The crystal pearl
Flowing
With the freedom
That only comes with flight
Falling
Ever closer
Yet will no longer be a sight
Ripples
Echo on the sand
Glimmer
The faintest hope
Of good fortune
The collection of like friends
Cast from heaven
An ungodly toss?
A spirit lost?
Tranquility
To moisten earth
And transform disparity
For grateful anticipation
For heaven has prolonged the entrance of more
The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!
And I won't make the same mistakes
(Because I know)
Because I know how much time that wastes
(And function)
Function is the key
And I won't make the same mistakes
(Because I know)
Because I know how much time that wastes
(And function)
Function is the key
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I like the word usage in this one. My favorite lines are above. When I read it I thought of someone struggling with their purpose in life and faith. It made me think of someone with good intentions misunderstood by most except a few. I also like the title, it is unique. Good read depop!
No one needs a smile more than someone who fails to give one,
After you die...you know how to LIVE!
Thanks twin. I was kndof thinking that hey...something so simple can be so amazing, yet cast aside. A single drop of rain does not mean much to most, nor do several. But look at it like a soul sent from above. You cast enough to one spot, and it can change the world.
And I won't make the same mistakes
(Because I know)
Because I know how much time that wastes
(And function)
Function is the key
Wow Depop! That is truly beautiful! I am so glad you see it that way! I really like that!
No one needs a smile more than someone who fails to give one,
After you die...you know how to LIVE!
Thanks...I am still trying to figure out how I can put some sort of evil twist on it, but fear I may be stumped for a bit
:(
And I won't make the same mistakes
(Because I know)
Because I know how much time that wastes
(And function)
Function is the key
Yeah really, heaven forbid it remain just "beautiful", that is not manly is it? O.k., I know...you could have it blood instead of raindrops. Who wants a puddle of blood, except perhaps dracula? How is that?
No one needs a smile more than someone who fails to give one,
After you die...you know how to LIVE!
Moo-hoo-ooo-ahhh-haaaa-haaaaaaa!!! I vant to suck yer blood!
I think it's a beautiful poem too, depop. Don't be messin' with it trying to make it all evil and shit! Some things are just meant to be loverly.
No evil twists!!! Some works of art are perfection and then the creator fucks it up by twisting it some way. I love it just the way it is. Don't cheapen it!!!
love on ya~
~me
Fuck up...the USA...
Look at me...I can rig...
The presidency!!!!
there you are.
- brain of c
yes, the rain represesnts blood....thats what I meant
And I won't make the same mistakes
(Because I know)
Because I know how much time that wastes
(And function)
Function is the key
And I won't make the same mistakes
(Because I know)
Because I know how much time that wastes
(And function)
Function is the key