needy

depopulationINCdepopulationINC Posts: 2,074
edited December 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
I have a hope

Will it come true

Every path

Leads me to you

Exposing my heart
For you to heed
Render me weak
Show you my need

Perhaps I’m just needy
Perhaps I’m just needy
I hope it’s not greedy
Perhaps I’m just needy

Wish the world
You for me
What can I do
What will come to be
What can I do
It’s you I wish to see

Live and love
That sounds nice
Gives you soul

All I know
It has to start
So that it can end

Set my mind
Do it with ease
Make a plan
Fulfill in time
Try again
Make a release
Try so hard
Try please

Perhaps I’m just needy
Perhaps I’m just needy
I hope it’s not greedy
Perhaps I’m just needy

Living without hope
But still I try
Living for you
It makes me cry
Nothing in return
I ask myself
Your heart doesn’t churn
Pleading but why

Perhaps I’m just needy
Perhaps I’m just needy
I hope it’s not greedy
Perhaps I’m just needy
Am I just needy
Am I just needy
Am I just needy
Am I just needy
The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

And I won't make the same mistakes
(Because I know)
Because I know how much time that wastes
(And function)
Function is the key
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Comments

  • twin1twin1 Posts: 902
    Good read depop. It was sweet and longing.
    Our love must not be just words, but True Love, which shows itself in action,
    No one needs a smile more than someone who fails to give one,
    After you die...you know how to LIVE!
  • thanks t..........
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    Years ago I had the thought that when a person feels this kind of longing in a helpless way it is like revisiting babyhood --like those days when one is so young that they can't speak to ask someone for food or a blanket-- so instead they just have to cry and exude need and wait for a caregiver to notice that something is wrong.

    That pre-language feeling of neediness. It's interesting. :)
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  • coachchriscoachchris Kelowna, British Columbia, Canada Posts: 749
    Perhaps I’m just needy
    I hope it’s not greedy

    I love these lines. The fact they repeat and the ending really hit everything home for me. Thanks for sharing :)
    Adolescence in essence is all about trust.
    Leaving is for the answering machine.
  • thanks for the input guys
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
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