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(in)sight

depopulationINCdepopulationINC Posts: 2,074
edited April 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
I stare in your eyes
I can see right through
Don’t see passion
I don’t see pain
I reach for your heart
I feel my hand go cold
Don’t sense life
I don’t sense anything

It hurts
Now
I can’t ignore
It shows
Now
Were you like this before
It grows
Now
Encompassing you
It knows
Now
Can your soul pick up to carry on

I open your blinds
I give you a sight to see
Can’t hold back everything
I can so some hope
I can see ice melt
I can sense it all about to unfold
Can’t give up on you
I can’t give up on everything
The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

And I won't make the same mistakes
(Because I know)
Because I know how much time that wastes
(And function)
Function is the key
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  • Mystique420Mystique420 Posts: 338
    one of your most fantastic pieces!! thanx for sharing it-- awesome ;)
    "To live,.... love,..... there's a song to be sung,....
    'cause we may not be the Young Ones,..."

    --first u sow the seed-- nature grows the seed-- then we eat the seed-- ;) nah,... we smoke it!
  • sistanumsysistanumsy Posts: 218
    Can your soul pick up two
    K-The lost will do their best to get home, if they are loved. To our soldiers who have given what they had.
  • sistanumsysistanumsy Posts: 218
    sistanumsy wrote:
    Can your soul pick up two
    oops I quit
    K-The lost will do their best to get home, if they are loved. To our soldiers who have given what they had.
  • twin1twin1 Posts: 902
    Very good depop! I really like the hope and depth of love in this one... :)
    Our love must not be just words, but True Love, which shows itself in action,
    No one needs a smile more than someone who fails to give one,
    After you die...you know how to LIVE!
  • clifford_1972clifford_1972 Posts: 113
    twin1 wrote:
    Very good depop! I really like the hope and depth of love in this one... :)

    You took the words from under my breath! The depth & intensity is overpowering,...
    "When a man lies,He murders some part of the world
    These are the pale deaths which men miscall their lives,All this I cannot bear to witness any longer,
    Cannot the kingdom of salvation,Take me home!"
    Cliff Burton R.I.PFebruary 10, 1962 – September 27, 1986
  • depopulationINCdepopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    thanks all..
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
  • depopulationINCdepopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    Mystique420 wrote:
    one of your most fantastic pieces!! thanx for sharing it-- awesome ;)


    wow, thanks...not that I think much of my writing, but I wouldn't have put this in my top ten...but thanks, I guess everybody's likes are diferent.

    :)
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
  • sistanumsysistanumsy Posts: 218
    I liked this is it an amorous piece?
    K-The lost will do their best to get home, if they are loved. To our soldiers who have given what they had.
  • depopulationINCdepopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    sistanumsy wrote:
    I liked this is it an amorous piece?

    no, not really....not for me anyways
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
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