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depopulationINCdepopulationINC Posts: 2,074
edited August 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Sometimes this old life just really isn’t fare
Opened eyes seek out someone else who cares
Have I always been this blind
When I finally reach fingertips out
Just to find that you’ve always been standing right there

Blind eyed
Cannot see
But inside
Knowing all of me

Reach out to me
Show me that your still standing there
Reach out to me
Instill enjoyment within my being
Reach out to me
Reach out to me
Reach out and take a hold
Reach out hold on, finally setting me free

Endearing thoughts that desire to be floating within my mind
Times of bliss are all I really seek
But the brilliance of your light just never found its way on in
Is the glory of your affection still waiting here for me

Reach out to my
Arms
Hold me tight
Reach out to me
Show me what I seek
Reach out to me
Let me sample what I need
Reach out to me
Show me that there’s still love
I pray it’s not just in my dreams

Blind eyed
Cannot see
But inside
Knowing all of me

So my life only seeks this feeble little glory
So my life seeks out a happy ending story
But if that fable can ever come to unfold
That’s all I really want
There’s nothing else I need
The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

And I won't make the same mistakes
(Because I know)
Because I know how much time that wastes
(And function)
Function is the key
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  • justamjustam Posts: 21,412
    depop, this one seems more hopeful than many of your other ones. (I like that.)

    depopulationINC wrote:

    So my life only seeks this feeble little glory
    So my life seeks out a happy ending story
    But if that fable can ever come to unfold
    That’s all I really want
    There’s nothing else I need

    This part appeals to me. :)
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  • depopulationINCdepopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    justam wrote:
    depop, this one seems more hopeful than many of your other ones. (I like that.)




    This part appeals to me. :)


    ahhhh there may be hope for me yet in this desolate sphere of nauseating persons and there ghastly deliberation and repulsive manner of conveying humanity.

    ^^^^^did not want to come across as too hopeful/cheery
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,412
    depopulationINC wrote:
    ahhhh there may be hope for me yet in this desolate sphere of nauseating persons and there ghastly deliberation and repulsive manner of conveying humanity.

    ^^^^^did not want to come across as too hopeful/cheery

    :)

    {{{depop}}}
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  • depopulationINCdepopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    justam wrote:
    :)

    {{{depop}}}


    Its not my choice, I really have no control over it. I contain a warped mind within the confines of my skull.
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,412
    depopulationINC wrote:
    Its not my choice, I really have no control over it. I contain a warped mind within the confines of my skull.

    LOL! :D
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  • pacifierpacifier Posts: 1,009
    Hope will get you everywhere :) I love seeing people with hope in their heart, especially when their eyes see none, it's that hope that will lead them to where they need to be. lovely.
  • depopulationINCdepopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    pacifier wrote:
    Hope will get you everywhere :) I love seeing people with hope in their heart, especially when their eyes see none, it's that hope that will lead them to where they need to be. lovely.


    well put

    thanks
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
  • kdpjamkdpjam Posts: 2,303
    depopulationINC wrote:
    Sometimes this old life just really isn’t fare
    Opened eyes seek out someone else who cares
    Have I always been this blind
    When I finally reach fingertips out
    Just to find that you’ve always been standing right there

    Blind eyed
    Cannot see
    But inside
    Knowing all of me

    Reach out to me
    Show me that your still standing there
    Reach out to me
    Instill enjoyment within my being
    Reach out to me
    Reach out to me
    Reach out and take a hold
    Reach out hold on, finally setting me free

    Endearing thoughts that desire to be floating within my mind
    Times of bliss are all I really seek
    But the brilliance of your light just never found its way on in
    Is the glory of your affection still waiting here for me

    Reach out to my
    Arms
    Hold me tight
    Reach out to me
    Show me what I seek
    Reach out to me
    Let me sample what I need
    Reach out to me
    Show me that there’s still love
    I pray it’s not just in my dreams

    Blind eyed
    Cannot see
    But inside
    Knowing all of me

    So my life only seeks this feeble little glory
    So my life seeks out a happy ending story
    But if that fable can ever come to unfold
    That’s all I really want
    There’s nothing else I need

    this is awesome....
    lay down all thoughts; surrender to the void
    ~it is shining it is shining~
  • depopulationINCdepopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    kdpjam wrote:
    this is awesome....

    I wouldn't say it is awesome.....but thanks, glad you enjoyed
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
  • twin1twin1 Posts: 902
    pacifier wrote:
    Hope will get you everywhere :) I love seeing people with hope in their heart, especially when their eyes see none, it's that hope that will lead them to where they need to be. lovely.

    I second that...beautiful post! :):)
    Our love must not be just words, but True Love, which shows itself in action,
    No one needs a smile more than someone who fails to give one,
    After you die...you know how to LIVE!
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