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depopulationINCdepopulationINC Posts: 2,074
edited May 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
With no sleep
The days drag on
Ever daunting
The way it comes
When all goes to leave
There lays the lion
There breathes the rising

And so we all look out to see
Is this a sunset
It’s not to clear
It’s not to distinct
And so we all look out to see
Will the sun rise
We lay in waiting
Will it ever come to be

Within the minds
Within the thoughts
Held back in time
Held back from knowing
Walking without reason
Heading to where no one can no
Leading for the blessed
Directly from where no one has seen

And so we all look out to see
Is this a sunset
It’s not to clear
It’s not to distinct
And so we all look out to see
Will the sun rise
We lay in waiting
Will it ever come to be

Inset hurting
Indulging pain
With so much passion
Reasoning is not a part of the game
Wounding words
All hurt the same
Blended in plain sight
No need to hide when there’s so many to blame
Weakness flaunts its lowered shield
It can not hide
It can not succeed
Righteous ones
We’re all to claim
With feats antisocialism
Anarchy prevails

And so we all look out to see
Is this a sunset
It’s not to clear
It’s not to distinct
And so we all look out to see
Will the sun rise
We lay in waiting
Will it ever come to be
The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

And I won't make the same mistakes
(Because I know)
Because I know how much time that wastes
(And function)
Function is the key
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Comments

  • deadnotedeadnote Posts: 1,678
    im running out of time
    ran out of money last year
    now this machine is so smart
    cant find a way to make a deal

    build it up to lose it freely
    set your laughter free

    dreamer in my dream

    we got the guns

    i love you,but im..............callin out.........callin out
  • twin1twin1 Posts: 902
    I really enjoyed this one depop...thought provoking as yours always are. :)
    Our love must not be just words, but True Love, which shows itself in action,
    No one needs a smile more than someone who fails to give one,
    After you die...you know how to LIVE!
  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    I liked this too, depopulous! :) I always enjoy a play on words and I really liked yours in this one and the fact that you repested it, it worked well---- "And so we all look out to see"- Love it! :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • depopulationINCdepopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    my breakdown....


    With no sleep
    The days drag on
    Ever daunting
    The way it comes
    When all goes to leave
    There lays the lion
    There breathes the rising

    this portion is supposed to represent the ME, and how the threats were always there. We knew they ere ther, layin in wait, analyzing its prey.

    And so we all look out to see
    Is this a sunset
    It’s not to clear
    It’s not to distinct
    And so we all look out to see
    Will the sun rise
    We lay in waiting
    Will it ever come to be

    the world has really canged in the past several years. It is not the open beautiful future we all once invisioned, but maybe that future is still out there. now we are the ones laying in wait of our prey...the visions, the world we once had.

    Within the minds
    Within the thoughts
    Held back in time
    Held back from knowing
    Walking without reason
    Heading to where no one can know
    Leading for the blessed
    Directly from where no one has seen

    why has the situation really become what it is. one side fights for reasons that they are not 100% sure of, but htere are many. One side fights to hold on to faith and sanctitude.

    And so we all look out to see
    Is this a sunset
    It’s not to clear
    It’s not to distinct
    And so we all look out to see
    Will the sun rise
    We lay in waiting
    Will it ever come to be

    Inset hurting
    Indulging pain
    With so much passion
    Reasoning is not a part of the game
    Wounding words
    All hurt the same
    Blended in plain sight
    No need to hide when there’s so many to blame
    Weakness flaunts its lowered shield
    It can not hide
    It can not succeed
    Righteous ones
    We’re all to claim
    With feats antisocialism
    Anarchy prevails

    is supposed to recapture the above points

    And so we all look out to see
    Is this a sunset
    It’s not to clear
    It’s not to distinct
    And so we all look out to see
    Will the sun rise
    We lay in waiting
    Will it ever come to be
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
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