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depopulationINCdepopulationINC Posts: 2,074
edited May 2007 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
I didn't really have a tittle to this, so I am open to suggestions.



Falling in further
All intensions tossed aside
I’m sensing a hunger
Giving solace to womb
I’m sensing your tone
Just can not ignore
I’m sensing the mood
Can never succeed

I’ve opened my eyes, to find my lost sight
I’ve opened my arms, I could not hold you tight
I’ve opened my heart, just to ease the pain inside

Not to tired
I’ll always try
I’m never to tired
I’ll keep on fighting
For what we hold inside

Know your not alone
I’m cleansing your wounds
You my not see this
Your entitled to that mood
So sorry eyes
Won’t leave you alone
I’m still here waiting
To keep you at home

I’ve opened my eyes, to find what you’ve shown
I’ve opened my arms, I could not leave you alone
I’ve opened my heart, now I’m not alone

There’s nowhere to run to
That I need to know
I’m standing here waiting
For this to be real
And I’ll keep on waiting
It’s all that I need
And I’ll keep on fighting
To lead you along
The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

And I won't make the same mistakes
(Because I know)
Because I know how much time that wastes
(And function)
Function is the key
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  • twin1twin1 Posts: 902
    Hey depop, I don't really have a title for this but it made me think of a sanctuary or somewhere for someone to go to get solace and safety. Nicely written by the way
    Our love must not be just words, but True Love, which shows itself in action,
    No one needs a smile more than someone who fails to give one,
    After you die...you know how to LIVE!
  • pacifierpacifier Posts: 1,009
    this one sounds sweet. the longing sounds painful, but beautifully so. It reminds me some how of the first poem I posted on this (newer) message pit.
  • depopulationINCdepopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    hmm, I will have to try to dig that up.
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
  • pacifierpacifier Posts: 1,009
    depopulationINC wrote:
    hmm, I will have to try to dig that up.

    no, no need. It is not very good. It is just about longing for someone in a seemingly impossible situation
  • depopulationINCdepopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    pacifier wrote:
    no, no need. It is not very good. It is just about longing for someone in a seemingly impossible situation

    Improbable

    nothing is impossible

    nothing
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
  • pacifierpacifier Posts: 1,009
    depopulationINC wrote:
    Improbable

    nothing is impossible

    nothing

    I'm with you one that one. That is why I wrote seemingly impossible. Actually, as improbable as it was (and it was very improbable) it was definately possible. Hence the MRS pacman :)
  • depopulationINCdepopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    pacifier wrote:
    I'm with you one that one. That is why I wrote seemingly impossible. Actually, as improbable as it was (and it was very improbable) it was definately possible. Hence the MRS pacman :)


    indeed, indeed

    That is always great to hear of the improbables working out for the best. good for you 2 (3)
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
  • pacifierpacifier Posts: 1,009
    depopulationINC wrote:
    indeed, indeed

    That is always great to hear of the improbables working out for the best. good for you 2 (3)

    :) yeah I guess so. I hope it offers hope to all those without hope. How many times can one say hope in the one sentence?

    It's even nicer to think that my desire for having an important person in my life has given me two very important people and hopefully a few more in the future. Having your own family is such a great experience. It's nearly an us-against-them experience, you feel as long as you have each other you have everything you need. DO you have a family of your own? DOes it make sense what I mean?
  • depopulationINCdepopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    pacifier wrote:
    :) yeah I guess so. I hope it offers hope to all those without hope. How many times can one say hope in the one sentence?

    It's even nicer to think that my desire for having an important person in my life has given me two very important people and hopefully a few more in the future. Having your own family is such a great experience. It's nearly an us-against-them experience, you feel as long as you have each other you have everything you need. DO you have a family of your own? DOes it make sense what I mean?


    It makes total sense. I have had that feeling...unfortunatelly, I have let various things get in the way of it...a true pity. I hope I get a chance to NOT make that mistake again.
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
  • pacifierpacifier Posts: 1,009
    depopulationINC wrote:
    It makes total sense. I have had that feeling...unfortunatelly, I have let various things get in the way of it...a true pity. I hope I get a chance to NOT make that mistake again.

    I hope so too. I know you will.
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