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depopulationINCdepopulationINC Posts: 2,074
edited July 2007 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
How Long



And if I’ve lost my mind
Well then I’ll have to say
Guess I did things right
To live so free that way
I hate to contemplate
I love my life today

She’s still in my mind
Hasn’t bee too long
So puzzled
And confused
Left in utter dismay
Not to say she left me
Not to claim that in any way
So stricken
Oh perplexed
Puzzled in every way
It’s only been one day
Or has it been a year
She’s knocking down my window
Though never drawing herself near
Perhaps he is her other
With all the questions that I hear
They torment me each and every other
Are they knowing,
Sensing what I let no one hear
I’ll lay asleep another night
Not a case of missing lovers
Just knowing I’ll never be
With my heart out on this sleeve
Can no one truly see
Camouflaged
Undercover
I try my best
To keep these dreams to me.

And if I never lost my mind
Well then I’d have to say
Did I ever approach things right
To live confined each day
I hate to contemplate
But I’d love to live today
The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

And I won't make the same mistakes
(Because I know)
Because I know how much time that wastes
(And function)
Function is the key
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  • depopulationINCdepopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    sorry, this all probably makes no sense to anyone...it is a mixture of 5 differrent thoughts and emothins all kinda rolled into one rambling, which when I see, it makes perfect sence, and actually clears my head a bit...but I fear that all the fuzz that is cleared out of my head in this writing will cause fuzz in your own.
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
  • chadwickchadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    depopulationINC wrote:
    sorry, this all probably makes no sense to anyone...it is a mixture of 5 differrent thoughts and emothins all kinda rolled into one rambling, which when I see, it makes perfect sence, and actually clears my head a bit...but I fear that all the fuzz that is cleared out of my head in this writing will cause fuzz in your own.

    then i'll have to check it out.
    reading it now.
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • chadwickchadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    it's bad-ass.
    i'll have to re-read it a few times.
    thanks for sharing it.
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    This doesn't seem confusing to me.
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  • coachchriscoachchris Kelowna, British Columbia, Canada Posts: 749
    IMO this is probably my favourit piece you've written! Thanks for sharing ;)
    Adolescence in essence is all about trust.
    Leaving is for the answering machine.
  • depopulationINCdepopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    See Through

    holding from comfort
    but holding hands to
    rise to the occasion
    maybe see this one through
    don't know a lot
    you can see every thought
    look a little deeper
    can see your way through
    but it's all about effort
    and what I can improve
    you see to an end
    Wish I could see that far to
    it's stuck in my mind
    going to make this fable come true

    maybe you able
    to sway impure thought
    I'm clearly not stable
    straying too fart for you
    everything I see
    everything in need
    and when I outreach
    it's then that I see

    you say that there's more
    than watching life stand still
    I give you all effort
    I give you all will
    maybe that's not enough
    guess it's not everything
    your pushing your will
    washing away everything
    I'm willing to bend
    But I'll never break
    I can't give anymore
    don't know how much I
    Don't know how much I've swallowed in hate

    Say I don't give
    I show that I care
    I'm willing to pledge
    but hate how you take
    I see your heart wonder
    I'll travel after you
    meet me part way
    this is a two way street

    You might see in
    You might see through
    but I'm not empty
    not nearly as you

    you might see in
    you might see through
    I might seem empty
    hey I've got a heart do you
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
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