Alcohol

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Alcohol
Just give me a moment for it to kick on in
Alcohol
Another sip of courage, right from my hands
Alcohol
Gimme a minute, to become a real man

With every whisper
To touch my lips
I grow a little courage
Gunnoa seek those hips
Tremble to tremble
No longer fear that shakes my hand
And in another minute
You’ll understand

Alcohol
Just give me a moment for it to kick on in
Alcohol
Another sip of courage, right from my hands
Alcohol
Gimme a minute, to become a real man

Sooner or later
Consumes with in
Controls my body
And owns my mind
And in another minute
But while I can still stand
Gunna loose control
Become another man

And in another minute
No right no wrong
Cause in another minute
It will be sunk in
And then I’ll live within it
Consumption rules
Help to carry out plans

Cuz in another minute
Cuz in another minute
Cuz in another minute

Alcohol
Just give me a moment for it to kick on in
Alcohol
Another sip of courage, right from my hands
Alcohol
Gimme a minute, to become a real man

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I really like this. And I should add that reading the first line of your signature after reading the poem, "The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!", I think they certainly fit well.

justam

I know some people don't like repetition in poems, but I like the way a musical rhythm appears with repetition.

This one works quite well I think.

The words that come back make it move more quickly I find and it sounds like a fast song to me.

depopulationINC

thank-you kindly

Astral Star

This woudl be a great song! Nice work.