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Follow through on love

twin1twin1 Posts: 902
edited June 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
When I asked what was wrong it's because I care,
I wasn't trying to be polite,
I did not want to fuss or fight,
There was nothing that I gained from it,
I didn't care if you were wrong or right,

It didn't make my job easier,
It didn't pay my bills or put food on my table,
It didn't help raise my children,
It didn't make my home stable,
I didn't expect a thing from you,
nothing more than you could give,
My love is not so conditional,
that I expect so much to live,

When I gave my love to you,
it's because I wanted to,
Love is a gift I enjoy giving,
with love...I follow through...
Our love must not be just words, but True Love, which shows itself in action,
No one needs a smile more than someone who fails to give one,
After you die...you know how to LIVE!
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  • bluejourneymanbluejourneyman Posts: 421
    That made me all fuzzy, inside!
    Can't you see that there's light in the dark.
    Nothing's quite what it seems in the city of dreams.
    (Wolfmother)
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~
    Grand Rapids 2006
  • afanafan Posts: 59
    This is really good. I enjoyed reading it. Wise words.
  • JamalJamal Posts: 2,115
    That's wen she rips out your heartn throws it on the pavement and dances "la cucaracha" on it, to eventually return it's remains to you in a doggybag :'(
    Surf little waves big... Charge big waves hard

    - Antwerp '06, Nijmegen '07, Werchter '07
  • afanafan Posts: 59
    Jamal wrote:
    That's wen she rips out your heartn throws it on the pavement and dances "la cucaracha" on it, to eventually return it's remains to you in a doggybag :'(

    I'm sorry that happened to you. I know how that feels. Guys do that too.
  • JamalJamal Posts: 2,115
    afan wrote:
    I'm sorry that happened to you. I know how that feels. Guys do that too.
    A french saying : "L'enfer, c'est les autres" ---> Hell are the others
    People are so cruel. :(
    Surf little waves big... Charge big waves hard

    - Antwerp '06, Nijmegen '07, Werchter '07
  • twin1twin1 Posts: 902
    bluejourneyman wrote:
    That made me all fuzzy, inside!

    thanks for the kind words! :)
    Our love must not be just words, but True Love, which shows itself in action,
    No one needs a smile more than someone who fails to give one,
    After you die...you know how to LIVE!
  • twin1twin1 Posts: 902
    afan wrote:
    This is really good. I enjoyed reading it. Wise words.

    thanks! :)
    Our love must not be just words, but True Love, which shows itself in action,
    No one needs a smile more than someone who fails to give one,
    After you die...you know how to LIVE!
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