Remembering...in time

twin1twin1 Posts: 902
edited January 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
In time
she will forget all of the small details,
the way he smiled,
the way he made her laugh,
how he was calm and patient,
that he liked to save empty green bottles,

In time
she will forget how he saved her,
from darkness and herself,
how his music soothed her soul,
that his peace was contagious,
that his art brought a sparkle to her eyes,

In time
she will only remember the way she felt in his presence,
like she was accepted for her and angelic in his eyes,

or will she?

perhaps she will not forget,
just tuck the good parts safely away
never to be forgotten, in her heart and in her mind...
Our love must not be just words, but True Love, which shows itself in action,
No one needs a smile more than someone who fails to give one,
After you die...you know how to LIVE!
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Comments

  • wow. i'm speechless. seriously, wow. silence has overtaken my body, i must go to the beach now and float in the waves.
    i'm a thief... and a liar...

    see Ed's church?--he's breathing fire.....
  • emotional stuff
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
  • This is so genuine, so sweet so happy and sad all at once...I think this is your best yet, twin1! :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • twin1twin1 Posts: 902
    Wow...thanks guys! :)
    Our love must not be just words, but True Love, which shows itself in action,
    No one needs a smile more than someone who fails to give one,
    After you die...you know how to LIVE!
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