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Beauty

twin1twin1 Posts: 902
edited January 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
the surface of things leads us to believe that beauty is in the eyes,
perhaps it's in the smile,
or the way our bodies glide,
could it be in skin that looks inviting,
or a graceful way to walk,
could it be in the seductive way some people choose to talk,
Or is the beauty that lasts a lifetime something more and true,
could the beauty that does not fade
await patiently...to awaken...in you...
Our love must not be just words, but True Love, which shows itself in action,
No one needs a smile more than someone who fails to give one,
After you die...you know how to LIVE!
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  • velvet I sitevelvet I site Posts: 192
    this is a very nice piece T1...

    a truly excellent ending to an inquisitve poem...

    could the beauty that does not fade
    await patiently...to awaken...in you...
    change begins with discontent.
  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    :):):)

    "Or is the beauty that lasts a lifetime something more and true,
    could the beauty that does not fade
    await patiently...to awaken...in you..."

    Mmmm, a sleeping beauty...just needs a tender wee kiss...;)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • twin1twin1 Posts: 902
    velvet I site wrote:
    this is a very nice piece T1...

    a truly excellent ending to an inquisitve poem...

    could the beauty that does not fade
    await patiently...to awaken...in you...

    Thanks velvet, I am glad you liked it! :)
    Our love must not be just words, but True Love, which shows itself in action,
    No one needs a smile more than someone who fails to give one,
    After you die...you know how to LIVE!
  • twin1twin1 Posts: 902
    Being Enlightened wrote:
    :):):)

    "Or is the beauty that lasts a lifetime something more and true,
    could the beauty that does not fade
    await patiently...to awaken...in you..."

    Mmmm, a sleeping beauty...just needs a tender wee kiss...;)


    hee! hee! perhaps a kiss...yeah, that would be nice... :)
    Our love must not be just words, but True Love, which shows itself in action,
    No one needs a smile more than someone who fails to give one,
    After you die...you know how to LIVE!
  • depopulationINCdepopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    velvet I site wrote:
    this is a very nice piece T1...

    a truly excellent ending to an inquisitve poem...

    could the beauty that does not fade
    await patiently...to awaken...in you...

    I shall re-state this...uhhu
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
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