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being open hearted

twin1twin1 Posts: 902
edited January 2007 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
people change sometimes,
maybe not the way they laugh,
or the little ways that make them who they are,

but sometimes they rethink things,
sometimes they reflect on the past and future,

they regret the harm they have done to others,
they miss friendships they have lost,

they decide to do right and be responsible,
they make a decision to own what they feel,

sometimes people redeem themselves
because they really need to,

never close the door to genuine love and stare in blind judgement,
because sometimes people really do change...
Our love must not be just words, but True Love, which shows itself in action,
No one needs a smile more than someone who fails to give one,
After you die...you know how to LIVE!
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  • Ms. HaikuMs. Haiku Washington DC Posts: 7,279
    When your heart is opened by others,
    and you're just an observer,
    watching the proceedings
    how would you know
    how different you would feel
    afterwards?

    A trial at the hands wrapped in thread
    that binds the heart back up.
    Strangers working on the nuances
    in their strange land
    filled with lights so bright
    you sleep to refuse blindness.
    There is no such thing as leftover pizza. There is now pizza and later pizza. - anonymous
    The risk I took was calculated, but man, am I bad at math - The Mincing Mockingbird
  • Ms. HaikuMs. Haiku Washington DC Posts: 7,279
    Ms. Haiku wrote:
    When your heart is opened by others,
    and you're just an observer,
    watching the proceedings
    how would you know
    how different you would feel
    afterwards?

    A trial at the hands wrapped in thread
    that binds the heart back up.
    Strangers working on the nuances
    in their strange land
    filled with lights so bright
    you sleep to refuse blindness.
    Ooops forgot the last part . . .

    They told you an open heart is primed to be closed,
    and you shut down the lights with their recommendations,
    and eventually you find the darkness
    a comfort.
    There is no such thing as leftover pizza. There is now pizza and later pizza. - anonymous
    The risk I took was calculated, but man, am I bad at math - The Mincing Mockingbird
  • pickupyourwillpickupyourwill Posts: 3,135
    twin1 wrote:
    people change sometimes,
    maybe not the way they laugh,
    or the little ways that make them who they are,

    but sometimes they rethink things,
    sometimes they reflect on the past and future,

    they regret the harm they have done to others,
    they miss friendships they have lost,

    they decide to do right and be responsible,
    they make a decision to own what they feel,

    sometimes people redeem themselves
    because they really need to,

    never close the door to genuine love and stare in blind judgement,
    because sometimes people really do change...


    I really liked this one. It pulled heart-string for me. I am one that wants to change. Cheers to you! :)
  • twin1twin1 Posts: 902
    Ms. Haiku wrote:
    Ooops forgot the last part . . .

    They told you an open heart is primed to be closed,
    and you shut down the lights with their recommendations,
    and eventually you find the darkness
    a comfort.

    Great read Ms. Haiku, the end made me sad though - I hope to never be comfortable to stay in darkness... :)
    Our love must not be just words, but True Love, which shows itself in action,
    No one needs a smile more than someone who fails to give one,
    After you die...you know how to LIVE!
  • twin1twin1 Posts: 902
    pickupyourwill wrote:
    I really liked this one. It pulled heart-string for me. I am one that wants to change. Cheers to you! :)

    Changing is a choice, a hard one, but sometimes needed. I am glad you enjoyed the read and hope for wonderful changes for you! :)
    Our love must not be just words, but True Love, which shows itself in action,
    No one needs a smile more than someone who fails to give one,
    After you die...you know how to LIVE!
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    great twin one..:)

    HOPE YOUR WEEKEND IS BEAUTIFUL AND PEACEFUL AND FUN!:D


    ALI
    ALLISON
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • bossman3188bossman3188 Posts: 263
    best piece i have ever read on here.
    there'll be time for laughin'
    there's no time to cry
    soon i will be leavin'
    look me in the eye
    no matter what's in front of me
    it's your face that i'll see
  • Pearl_Jam_NecklacePearl_Jam_Necklace Posts: 501
    twin1 wrote:
    people change sometimes,
    maybe not the way they laugh,
    or the little ways that make them who they are,

    but sometimes they rethink things,
    sometimes they reflect on the past and future,

    they regret the harm they have done to others,
    they miss friendships they have lost,

    they decide to do right and be responsible,
    they make a decision to own what they feel,

    sometimes people redeem themselves
    because they really need to,

    never close the door to genuine love and stare in blind judgement,
    because sometimes people really do change...



    wow..reading this .....wow...
    ...It's only after disaster that we can be resurrected...
    it's only after you've lost everything ...that you are free to do anything....(Fight Club)

    ... I'll ride the wave...where it takes me....
  • jboelhowjboelhow Posts: 170
    Nice work! (Would write more, but grading papers).
    Live the life you dream

    "Cause I can't wait to figure out what's wrong with me
    So I can say this is the way I use to be" -- John Mayer
  • twin1twin1 Posts: 902
    Thanks Ali - what a sweetheart, back at ya'! :):)

    Bossman - Thanks so much, you are very kind! I tend to right straight from the heart with honesty, I should probably be more mysterious but I guess I am more of a straight shooter... :)

    PJ Necklace & jb - I am so glad you liked it :)
    Our love must not be just words, but True Love, which shows itself in action,
    No one needs a smile more than someone who fails to give one,
    After you die...you know how to LIVE!
  • twin1twin1 Posts: 902
    twin1 wrote:
    I tend to right straight from the heart with honesty, I should probably be more mysterious but I guess I am more of a straight shooter... :)

    I do know right from write, duhh....I think my brain has officially left, this last trimester is a bear! :)
    Our love must not be just words, but True Love, which shows itself in action,
    No one needs a smile more than someone who fails to give one,
    After you die...you know how to LIVE!
  • pacifierpacifier Posts: 1,009
    Twin1. I've been away for a while so I am checking up some of my favourites writers on here, which includes you, and I'm glad I did. I love your poems. more often than not they leave me feeling happy. They are heartfelt but not soppy and positive but not unrealistic. Love it.
  • BuruBuru Posts: 8,473
    Ms. Haiku wrote:
    Ooops forgot the last part . . .

    They told you an open heart is primed to be closed,
    and you shut down the lights with their recommendations,
    and eventually you find the darkness
    a comfort.


    Really beautiful Ms. Haiku.


    To the thread starter - Sometimes (only a very few sometimes) they do change
    :)
    y la banda de Guille... cuando toca?
  • depopulationINCdepopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    twin1 wrote:
    people change sometimes,
    maybe not the way they laugh,
    or the little ways that make them who they are,

    but sometimes they rethink things,
    sometimes they reflect on the past and future,

    they regret the harm they have done to others,
    they miss friendships they have lost,

    they decide to do right and be responsible,
    they make a decision to own what they feel,

    sometimes people redeem themselves
    because they really need to,

    never close the door to genuine love and stare in blind judgement,
    because sometimes people really do change...


    One can watch its leaves float away,
    rest, re-energize, and look a new
    leaves soon grow, taking form in a better way
    bloodlines run ever deep
    changing souls is difficult
    when leaves lifelines seep from the tree
    whos veins always go root deep
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
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