Dry Eyes

twin1
twin1 Posts: 902
edited November 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Holding them as they cry,
looking at me with red rimmed eyes,
pleading and begging for no goodbyes,
but my eyes remain dry,

Showing momentos and sentiments from the past,
longing and sadness seem to last,
trying to convience me that all was a lie,
but my eyes remain dry,

Excuses and reasons for all of the wrongs,
reassurance that the darkness is gone,
forcing guilt and how you will die,
but my eyes remain dry,

Using all tactics and genuine hurt,
knowing what is happening, fearing the worst,
devasting pain as I force goodbye,
but my eyes remain dry...
Our love must not be just words, but True Love, which shows itself in action,
No one needs a smile more than someone who fails to give one,
After you die...you know how to LIVE!
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  • twin2
    twin2 Posts: 894
    I like this one. It's very descriptive. I wish I were there to hug you.
  • twin1
    twin1 Posts: 902
    twin2 wrote:
    I like this one. It's very descriptive. I wish I were there to hug you.

    Thanks sis! I am good. I wrote this before. SMILE!!! :o)))
    Our love must not be just words, but True Love, which shows itself in action,
    No one needs a smile more than someone who fails to give one,
    After you die...you know how to LIVE!
  • lovin kind
    lovin kind Posts: 268
    its perfect
    thanks to everyone who can read what i write without having to say something mean
  • twin1
    twin1 Posts: 902
    lovin kind wrote:
    its perfect

    Why thank you so much! Wow! I don't know what to say! You are too kind! Perfect is a word that I find rather hard to grasp. Thanks, much appreciated!
    Our love must not be just words, but True Love, which shows itself in action,
    No one needs a smile more than someone who fails to give one,
    After you die...you know how to LIVE!

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