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Music

twin1twin1 Posts: 902
edited December 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Dancing with abandon,
hyponotic melody,
the notes and words,
flowing with mastery,

the instruments scream,
with passion and intensity,
yearning to be heard,
with relentless savagery,

the singer's pitch,
ranges so errotically,
weaving through your thoughts,
with unforgiving purety,

all fine-tuned,
practiced ellaborately,
history in the making...
touching all humanity
Our love must not be just words, but True Love, which shows itself in action,
No one needs a smile more than someone who fails to give one,
After you die...you know how to LIVE!
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  • pacifierpacifier Posts: 1,009
    :) I could see the music. Is this music in generally or more specifically. Pearl Jam perhaps? :) of course I was thinking of Pearl Jam when I read it.
  • hsewifhsewif Posts: 444
    Reminds me of ballet. :)
  • twin2twin2 Posts: 894
    Really nice. I do like it.
  • twin1twin1 Posts: 902
    pacifier wrote:
    :) I could see the music. Is this music in generally or more specifically. Pearl Jam perhaps? :) of course I was thinking of Pearl Jam when I read it.

    I was listening to something in particular when I wrote it, not Pearl Jam. But it could be Pearl jam - it is whatever music makes each person feel that way, individual to each person. :)

    Thanks for the kind words! :)
    Our love must not be just words, but True Love, which shows itself in action,
    No one needs a smile more than someone who fails to give one,
    After you die...you know how to LIVE!
  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    :) Very nice, twin1! :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • twin1twin1 Posts: 902
    Thanks BE! :)
    Our love must not be just words, but True Love, which shows itself in action,
    No one needs a smile more than someone who fails to give one,
    After you die...you know how to LIVE!
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